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starfishchick October 25 2004, 05:57:36 UTC
Hee! Glad you kickstarted this pairing again!

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honeyfitz October 26 2004, 08:49:02 UTC
I hope others follow suit. And I hope to continue this story to get to the good bits! They're in my mind, believe me :)

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littlestclouds October 25 2004, 09:13:16 UTC
mmmmmmmmmmarnieboone.

i like the first line a LOT. 's'what drew me in.

Jeter had kept that crumpled piece of paper in his jacket pocket for months.

i can almost visualize him walking around with the piece of paper in his pocket.

now, you must write more. *nods demandingly*

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Thanks honeyfitz October 26 2004, 04:51:02 UTC
for the positive response. Will get writing as soon as I return from my holiday!

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Re: Thanks littlestclouds October 26 2004, 10:46:42 UTC
yay! :D looking forward to it!

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