Humanity is one Badly written story.

Nov 08, 2007 08:06

Think about it. In the start of the story theres nothing but a few of a new breed. Pack hunters, no better than wolves. They discover fire and develop tools, then suddenly they are the top of the food chain.

During this time they are nomads, going from place to place, some staying behind to settle in an area, while the rest move on to new unexplored regions. Until theres nowhere left to go. They've settled in europe, africa, asia, and crossed the land ridges to north america, making there way down to south america.

Then all these place develope more. They all build up towns and cities were each group has settled. They are already outnumbering all the animal species in numbers due to this spread throughout the world. The only thing with more numbers than humans are insects.

Animal species die out due to over hunting.

Emipres rise,war get waged, some empires fall.

Now, all this is just up until the supposed birth, of the supposed son of god. No one actually know if he is, but alot of people take his lack of words for it.

Now up until this point everythings been pretty origional right? Except for south america and africa both having pyramids. But thats just bad cultural design, having two groups of people that have never met each other having similar buildings. Right? That is unless there was such a thing as atlantis which was a middle ground between the two, but i'm getting a little off topic.

So everythings been pretty origional, now this is where this story gets repetative.

More war is waged, and more emires fall.

Humans begin to devlop more tool. No longer for hunting animals for the most part though, as all the animals wee need are now cattle. These new tools are designed for "hunting" other humans.

The nomadic nature of the human species kicks in again, must find the new land. Discovering america.(Again)

More war waged. If you can call sluaghtering the native people of a country war.

More towns and cities pop up, becoming more developed. Still the only things outnumberind humans are insects.

More war is waged. And again. And again. And again. And again.

New discoverys are made for the "betterment" of mankind. Which really dooms humanity to an apocoliptic future. But this is about the past, not the future.

Empires rises.For the purposes of this america and the vatican are empires. They both have lots of money and plenty of people they "rule" over.

War is waged. And again.

Himanity dicovers that more and more animal species are extinct, or at least endangered. And that this has been going on for as long as humanity has been around.

Now is humanity destined to repeat this cycle? Will we be forever at war with people the same as us. Will we be forever at war with people supposedly different from us? Will we continue to eradicate species from this planet? Will we continue to look for new place to do the same to?

Well, maybe not, as whoever writes this repetative shit, has done something origional. Endangered the entire planet! Something that has been in geeky stories since they started. Plagerism much?

Global warming. Man discovers that fire, and some of mans tools which were for the "betterment of mankind" are actually taking away the layer of the atmosphere which protects us from the sun, and also sending up gases which keep more heat in. Effectively killing there own planet.

Will we survive through this? Who knows. But the majority seem not to care, citing that they will be dead long before it happens. So much for protecting your own family and other values which supposedly humanity is about. Turns out its all about yourself, and if your not around for a cataclysmic disaster then why care, you'll already be dead.

Yes. Who ever wrote this story must be really brilliant or really sad. Humanity, the greatest story ever told, and its a story thats destined to save itself, or destroy itself.

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Wow what a rambling peice of shit.
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