2 inception ficlets

[moirariordan]

blue green colors flashing, ariadne/arthur (inception), nc-17, ~2,000 words

i wrote this because of the incredibly talented nami86's drawing for forgerness's inception rarepair fest. you can find her drawing here (slightly nsfw). title from fleetwood mac's "silver springs."

Comments

[redinadress]

this is good.

[moirariordan]

thank you!

[lithiumlaughter]

I would just like you to know that 'it's like fate, or something' was amazing in all the right ways. Screw suspension of disbelief, it was WONDERFUL.

Ariadne was a fantastically rendered character here. She's this wonderful, hurting, fifteen year old, and you lay out her story so effectively in such a short, controlled amount of space. Well played. I love that she didn't tell Arthur. That idea that the words were for her is just so powerful and so resonant...and so true. It just makes sense.

And Arthur. ARTHUR. Of course he'd be all snarky and supportive at the same time, and do the gentlemanly thing by comping her food and seeing her safely to a cab. D'aaaaw.

TL;DR? Awesome. Thank you.

[moirariordan]

What a lovely comment, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it, I really enjoyed writing it.

:)

[lithiumlaughter]

Hey, when the piece is lovely it deserves a lovely comment. Glad to hear it was as fun to write as it was to read.

Cheers!

[elliesmeow]

These were both excellent. I can't pick a favorite between the two of them. I guess you'll just have to write more so I can find one I like best.;)

Thanks very much for posting these. Very enjoyable.

-Ellie

[moirariordan]

Thank you very much! I am working on something else, so you'll probably hear more from me, :)

[moirariordan]

thank you so much! :)

[bennet_7]

These are both gorgeous. Your imagery is really fantastic, adding just enough without overburdening the story. Thanks for sharing!

[moirariordan]

thank you! that's a really great thing to hear :)