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moonspoken March 27 2010, 22:05:13 UTC
Oh my God.

This actually killed me. There is just-- too much I loved about this. You wrote them so believably and naturally! And them being all stupid and every wire ever getting crossed! And Godga being Godga! And the references to Gatsby! Then the end, and this:
Adam stares at the bottle unblinkingly, then back up at Kris, eyes dark and intense. “Kris,” he says. “Shut up.”

And them using all the lube and Gaga leaving them a bag of treats and augh, this is my favourite kind of fic with all the tension and then the gloriously happy ending. I was literally laughing hysterically by the end because I loved it so much.

Did I mention how well you wrote Kris and Allen? Because it was really, really good. And also Carli was awesome. And poor drunken jealous Adam, and poor stupid them both! I'd forgotten how much I love Adam/Kris until this fic.
♥♥

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moirariordan March 27 2010, 22:23:43 UTC
LOL, awesome, thank you. <33 In my head, they used all the lube because they accidentally spilled it, and then spent ten minutes arguing because Kris thought the bedspread was super expensive and he wanted to leave a note, and Adam thought that was stupid, because the last time he'd been here Gaga had been filming something and had set an entire roomful of furniture on fire, so. And Kris was all, "that doesn't mean that we should do whatever we want with her stuff," and Adam was like, "okay, maybe we should wait until after your tour to have sex then, because I have an award show tonight" and that shut him up.

Oh, I can't stop myself.

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moonspoken March 27 2010, 22:26:21 UTC
UM YOU SHOULD NEVER EVER EVER STOP YOURSELF.
JUST GO RIGHT AHEAD.

You write the best Kris I've ever seen. It kills me a lot.

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moirariordan March 27 2010, 22:30:37 UTC
Aw, thank you. Considering some of the fantastic fic in this fandom, that's quite the compliment ♥

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spikedluv March 27 2010, 22:50:47 UTC
That was awesome! So much . . . sex awesomeness!!!

She's magic, lol! *loves*

Coincidence, or DESTINY?

Destiny, apparently. *g*

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wikken March 27 2010, 23:04:13 UTC

a_muse_zing1 March 28 2010, 00:08:44 UTC
Really terrific! Love the characterization of Kris as I think you got him pretty true. And the whole Gaga as the matchmaker is genius. I love the PG-13 quality of it, mainly because I never seem to be able to write anything that doesn't get graphic. Not sure I could. So please...don't stop writing!

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moirariordan March 28 2010, 02:23:50 UTC
Haha, PG-13 is mostly because I suck at writing sex. But hey, let's call it artistic choice, that sounds better.

Thank you! :)

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shai285 March 28 2010, 00:27:39 UTC
This was really funny, sweet, and sexy. Thanks for sharing!

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