So. Your intro bit "character death", okay. That's fine. I'm okay with character death, chill as a cucumber, cooler than an ice cube. Yknow me, coolest of the beans. Character death, bring it.
kris is possibly a lion ..what. Oh that's cool. Lion are fascinating, i prompted you with that I would know just how fascinating wonder where this'll go.
And so I was ready and thrilled and anticipating something fluffy and then I just --what the actual. HOW DOES LUHAN KNOW KRIS IS KRIS AS A LION DESPITE HIS handsome HAIRY FACE/WHY WOULD HE BE A LION ALL OF A SUDDEN>>> wait whats lay and tao doing >>> HOW THE F DOES ONE ROUGHHOUSE ANOTHER INTO A TABLE HARD ENOUGH TO SCARR THEM FOR LIFE GDI LUHAN WATER U DOIN??? DO YOU EVEN LIFT
((sorry, this is me typing out my train of thoughts which is jumbled and cray because everything is happening all at once hahaha. )) ps. I like how you brought in the glasses here, very causal and not whack out of the world. 10 points to you!!
That tiinny snippet of krishan is actually fluffily q because I was on a luhan spree before as you knew and and and he was all happy and helpy like the bookmarking thing and qt and like wow this love is too q okay. The fond smile and kiss to a cheek \o// that’s it. Just take coco already okay. All yours.
But then the spiraling of their relationship and I just sit here, ah. The typical scenario of a man who can’t take the help given. You poor man wu yifan jiaheng, you poor man. make my heart all achy breaky, you know? nae maem appa.
I trollolol how hairless animal = humans though. Tbh I had an idea of something like this too ((but with a horse/dog but dang you vj, stole my idea!! cough)) which is one of the main reasons why I just o__o what. But yeah, is good. I like it, THANKS FOR YOUR HARD WORK MS BLOBMASTER ;uu; I enjoyed it very muchy and so many apologies for falling alsep while writing this out ehhe please don’t hurt me I still love you /o\
My concrit (?) two cents on the fic: you could’ve elaborated a bit more with the details, idk. I think it would just make the fic more “filling”? Ah mean, here’s me describing music again orz I liked it anyway. Yes. gdi. Sorry im kinda lousy with comments and words, I just dont know how to send my love across ;nn;
Pps. Taoxing’s love is too cute. China-line is da bomb trollololol
Ppps. But seriously. Theme change she says. Friccking did not expect this shit okay. AAHAH you really caught me off guard there xd good job, im pretty good at predicting things but this… ah… anyway. thumbs up buddy :) Please don’t anticipate mines much idk how goes, gonna start now heeeuuu
so i started out with meaning for this to be slightly cracky and fluffy. but luhan apparently is a angst muse for me because he's the only one that makes me write angst any more. and then triple character death /bricks myself.
I DON'T KNOW!!! HE'S DELUSIONAL WITH SORROW OVER LOSING HIS LOVED ONE AND THEN HE'S TURNED CRAZY SO HE THINKS THE LION IS YIFAN BUT MAYBE IT IS? IDK!!
AND LUHAN HAS STRONG THIGHS? AND WHEN HE'S KICKING HIM HEAD FIRST INTO STONE IDK? i actually thought about how realistic it was but then i just went blah. idk how i would do it otherwise.
there needed to be a bit of fluff because i hate angst and i love fluff.
now that i read through it again, i think so too. but yesterday i was just kind of high and then my brother texted me and said he was coming to pick me up from work and i just went what? waht? you don't have a car, you can't drive are you seriously taking the bus all the way to the other end of the city to pick me up and go back with the same bus waht
the theme change kind of took me by surprise too.. but glad you think it's a good job.
i think it's the most random thing i've ever written.
So. Your intro bit "character death", okay. That's fine. I'm okay with character death, chill as a cucumber, cooler than an ice cube. Yknow me, coolest of the beans. Character death, bring it.
kris is possibly a lion
..what. Oh that's cool. Lion are fascinating, i prompted you with that I would know just how fascinating wonder where this'll go.
And so I was ready and thrilled and anticipating something fluffy and then I just --what the actual.
HOW DOES LUHAN KNOW KRIS IS KRIS AS A LION DESPITE HIS handsome HAIRY FACE/WHY WOULD HE BE A LION ALL OF A SUDDEN>>> wait whats lay and tao doing >>> HOW THE F DOES ONE ROUGHHOUSE ANOTHER INTO A TABLE HARD ENOUGH TO SCARR THEM FOR LIFE GDI LUHAN WATER U DOIN??? DO YOU EVEN LIFT
((sorry, this is me typing out my train of thoughts which is jumbled and cray because everything is happening all at once hahaha. ))
ps. I like how you brought in the glasses here, very causal and not whack out of the world. 10 points to you!!
That tiinny snippet of krishan is actually fluffily q because I was on a luhan spree before as you knew and and and he was all happy and helpy like the bookmarking thing and qt and like wow this love is too q okay. The fond smile and kiss to a cheek \o// that’s it. Just take coco already okay. All yours.
But then the spiraling of their relationship and I just sit here, ah. The typical scenario of a man who can’t take the help given. You poor man wu yifan jiaheng, you poor man. make my heart all achy breaky, you know? nae maem appa.
I trollolol how hairless animal = humans though. Tbh I had an idea of something like this too ((but with a horse/dog but dang you vj, stole my idea!! cough)) which is one of the main reasons why I just o__o what. But yeah, is good. I like it, THANKS FOR YOUR HARD WORK MS BLOBMASTER ;uu; I enjoyed it very muchy and so many apologies for falling alsep while writing this out ehhe please don’t hurt me I still love you /o\
My concrit (?) two cents on the fic: you could’ve elaborated a bit more with the details, idk. I think it would just make the fic more “filling”? Ah mean, here’s me describing music again orz
I liked it anyway. Yes. gdi. Sorry im kinda lousy with comments and words, I just dont know how to send my love across ;nn;
Pps. Taoxing’s love is too cute. China-line is da bomb trollololol
Ppps. But seriously. Theme change she says. Friccking did not expect this shit okay. AAHAH you really caught me off guard there xd good job, im pretty good at predicting things but this… ah… anyway. thumbs up buddy :)
Please don’t anticipate mines much idk how goes, gonna start now heeeuuu
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I DON'T KNOW!!! HE'S DELUSIONAL WITH SORROW OVER LOSING HIS LOVED ONE AND THEN HE'S TURNED CRAZY SO HE THINKS THE LION IS YIFAN BUT MAYBE IT IS? IDK!!
AND LUHAN HAS STRONG THIGHS? AND WHEN HE'S KICKING HIM HEAD FIRST INTO STONE IDK? i actually thought about how realistic it was but then i just went blah. idk how i would do it otherwise.
there needed to be a bit of fluff because i hate angst and i love fluff.
now that i read through it again, i think so too. but yesterday i was just kind of high and then my brother texted me and said he was coming to pick me up from work and i just went what? waht? you don't have a car, you can't drive are you seriously taking the bus all the way to the other end of the city to pick me up and go back with the same bus waht
the theme change kind of took me by surprise too.. but glad you think it's a good job.
i think it's the most random thing i've ever written.
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and ofc, the table going through his ears. yes. ears. **judging look rn okay.
either way, im happy. was done swimmingly well
see, even tao agrees
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what ears and eyes same same you know. i look with my ears all the times haven't i told you that??
kekekek let me swim with him
so i had to post the refill of stock and it says press F11 my keyboard does not have that *rages*
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