first of all, baekai with this prompt ugh i'm so flknbldfnbkndfnkbnf it tore my heart into pieces imagining the two of them going through all of this. baekhyun is my bias, and jongin is probably the member i have those you know feelings of please-never-get-hurt about, and ugh hdu make the two of them go through all of this lknbdnfblknfn oh god i'm trying to write a coherent comment but everything is just going through my mind right now lknbldfkn
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;_____; thank you so much for the love you've given this fic it has made every painstaking minute of being indecisive and all the days of headache worth it!!!! because i wanted to do the prompt justice it's such a beautiful prompt and yeah i'm just glad this fic wasn't a total flop ;u;
i'm so glad it was your prompts that i was assigned to because without such perfection none of this would've been possible!! and i'm glad you didn't find my style tiresome HAHAHAHA
THANK YOU your love is making me more motivated to write other heartbreaking fics in the future!!! it's been an honour writing for you!
author-nim, whoever you are, you've gained a huge fan right here. i love how you intersect the narration and the flashbacks and the lines 'because i start praying the minute i laid my eyes on you.' i'm just-- this just a perfect mix of teeny tiny fluff and whole lot of angst. i was seriously hoping a happy ending despite the huge ass warning of CHARACTER DEATH at the beginning. this is just so so so beautifully written and that i can't wait for 30/1 to come by so i can give you all my love properly. sorry for there's a mistake or anything because i'm on my phone and my face is just a tear-streaked mess right now. i love you, author-nim and thanks again for writing this fic. sorry if this is embarrassing and such a monstrosity of a comment. ok i'm done.
i have to apologise because the bits of fluff i attempted to slip in turned out reaLLY CHEESY LMFAO. i considered leaving out the character death warning because i wanted the ending to be an open one you know - did baekhyun die? or did jongin die? BUT THEN I REALISED EITHER WAY SOMEONE WAS GOING TO DIE LMAO
thank you so much for taking the time to read this fic and comment on it! your kind words mean a lot to me ;o; ♥
....omg ;A; i'll admit i was slow to warm up to this at first, but as the story unfolded the feelings built up... that gradual burn that leads to the painful lump in your throat, the one that just won't go away as you are trying your hardest to not spill tears everywhere (´Д｀) .. and that last line. hDVJS CNLUHFYbiasb hltr js,gfdgfhdvjewvyes
this was achingly beautiful. it felt like my heart was breaking for both of them as time passed by. that both of them found one another while in such a predicament is a cruel joke. but great fic anon, really ♡♡♡
i'm not surprised i tend to be a little wordy at the start u___u but thank you so much for bulldozing through it I SALUTE YOU idek if i would do the same if i were in your shoes HAHAHAH
thank you so much for commenting on this fic! it means a lot ♥♥♥♥♥♥
i'm crying. its been a long time i cry over a fic. and this.. your fic... i just... idk??i cant make a coherent word, just??? this is so beautiful, has a really deep meaning, funny in some ways (the cookies-leaves part though ugh i love it). the haircut scene omg T______T
the characterization, i really love all of them! baekhyun, jongin, junmyeon.. how insecure, fragile baekhyun and jongin are.. how super nice junmyeon is.. i just love them so much!!
i read the warning and i'm already prepare myself with "character death" but still... here i'am.. crying over my pillow and just can let out a "why...???"
So he does what he thinks is most appropriate. He stands back, and bows low - a full 90 degrees - to Junmyeon. Words fail him more often than not, and he knows his actions come across much better.
“Thank you. For everything.”
this particular scene hits me like a knife. . . . . . . . . . i fucking hate the ending. i just..... he is scared in last minute. he wants to live. dammit. why. T____________________________________T
I DIDN'T MEAN FOR ANY TEARS TO BE SHED??? jk i totally did but i mean my writing still needs a lot of improvement to evoke such a reaction i'm ;;; thank you so much for your kind words!!
i love junmyeon's character tbh, because he's kind of like the bridge between baekhyun and jongin and at first my friend was like why the heckie is junmyeon in this what is his purpose BUT TO ME if junmyeon wasn't in the fic there would've been no baekai??? idk just my take on it hehe
t_________________t APOLOGIES FOR THE LAME ENDING TBH thank you so much for reading and commenting!!! ♥
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first of all, baekai with this prompt ugh i'm so flknbldfnbkndfnkbnf it tore my heart into pieces imagining the two of them going through all of this. baekhyun is my bias, and jongin is probably the member i have those you know feelings of please-never-get-hurt about, and ugh hdu make the two of them go through all of this lknbdnfblknfn oh god i'm trying to write a coherent comment but everything is just going through my mind right now lknbldfkn ( ... )
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i'm so glad it was your prompts that i was assigned to because without such perfection none of this would've been possible!! and i'm glad you didn't find my style tiresome HAHAHAHA
THANK YOU your love is making me more motivated to write other heartbreaking fics in the future!!! it's been an honour writing for you!
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this whole fic was brilliant i'm just-- in awe??? it's like baekai but 17k baekai mmm do you see the importance of that
and of course i forgot that it was angst I BROKE DOWN AT YOUR LAST SCENE YOU OWE ME ANOTHER HEART
this is such a lackluster comment but when the reveals are out i will shower you with love hearteu hearteu
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ilu ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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thank you so much for taking the time to read this fic and comment on it! your kind words mean a lot to me ;o; ♥
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this was achingly beautiful. it felt like my heart was breaking for both of them as time passed by. that both of them found one another while in such a predicament is a cruel joke. but great fic anon, really ♡♡♡
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thank you so much for commenting on this fic! it means a lot ♥♥♥♥♥♥
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the characterization, i really love all of them! baekhyun, jongin, junmyeon.. how insecure, fragile baekhyun and jongin are.. how super nice junmyeon is.. i just love them so much!!
i read the warning and i'm already prepare myself with "character death" but still... here i'am.. crying over my pillow and just can let out a "why...???"
So he does what he thinks is most appropriate. He stands back, and bows low - a full 90 degrees - to Junmyeon. Words fail him more often than not, and he knows his actions come across much better.
“Thank you. For everything.”
this particular scene hits me like a knife.
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i fucking hate the ending. i just..... he is scared in last minute. he wants to live. dammit. why. T____________________________________T
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i love junmyeon's character tbh, because he's kind of like the bridge between baekhyun and jongin and at first my friend was like why the heckie is junmyeon in this what is his purpose BUT TO ME if junmyeon wasn't in the fic there would've been no baekai??? idk just my take on it hehe
t_________________t APOLOGIES FOR THE LAME ENDING TBH thank you so much for reading and commenting!!! ♥
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