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byunbaekhyun January 29 2014, 19:20:35 UTC
There's a pain in my chest right now. T_T

After everything Baek and Sehun felt and went through, thank heavens they ended up together!

I'm just... I'm happy even if I feel like I'm dying right now. LOL. Thank you for writing this!

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byunbaekhyun January 30 2014, 04:15:07 UTC
Can I just add that this:

“You should try advertising or something. PR work. You’d be good at that.” He says it like it’s something he’s put a lot of thought into, like he’d sat around thinking about what Baekhyun would be good for, instead of just what he’d failed at.

made me cry. The subtlety of it... Sehun didn't have to say that he was thinking of Baekhyun even if he was away. It was all there -- the longing, the concern, the love. Ugh. My heart still hurts right now.

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thievingbird January 30 2014, 03:08:38 UTC
argh 24 year old sehun, i want to know what this looks like (屮゚Д゚)屮. i'm impatient ;; i'm trying to imagine it here and am just weak at the knees at the thought of him being a 24yo man ;; and all sophisticated and rich and carrying himself like that and argh the images my mind is conjuring. please. send. heLp (つД`)ノ

“Baekhyun- “ Sehun starts, mouth open uncertainly, and Baekhyun swallows, curls his fingers around the edge of the bar to steady himself.
DONT YOU DARE ANSWER THAT PHOEN YOU SHIT< NO LISTEN TO SEHUN VHFVUFBSHHUDBKHJ<
“I should go,” Baekhyun says once he hangs up. His drink is only half gone but his mouth tastes sour. He should go.
ARGRHBHRBJRHBHJHB *throws pillows at him*

“Look, Baekhyun,” he starts, eyes serious. The look in them reminds him of that night in the club, and if Baekhyun could back away, he would, but the desk is in the way, so he finds himself edging to the side, shaking off Sehun’s hand.

“I’ve got to go,” Baekhyun says suddenly, once he’s free.STOP RUNNIGNAWAY FROM IT ARGH i'm so frustrated with baekhyun ( ... )

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veepzing January 30 2014, 12:07:53 UTC
i liked this a lot ;u; it felt very realistic and i especially liked baekhyun's character and how you built the sebaek relationship ;www; this really hit my sweet spot as a story, you did a really good job. thanks for writing ! ;w;

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airplanewishes January 30 2014, 12:26:29 UTC
BaekSe isn't a pairing that I particularly like, nor do I hate them. They're there and sometimes they're cute and it doesn't really make me feel anything in particular. But this fic is so good that I don't even care about the pairing. This fic is really striking, in how Baekhyun's tried to keep himself in a mold that he thinks he should be in and has kept his feelings for Sehun and, in turn, hid who he really was. I could really feel the struggle that he has with keeping up with wedding plans and doing his best to excel at work and to make his family happy. Each scene with each girl were different, but they all hurt differently and I really liked how different each was and how it affected Baekhyun in different ways. The tension between Sehun and Baekhyun, ugh, maaaaan I could feel it in every scene so props for that.

I got teary eyed, at that part where Baekhyun told his mom that he doesn't want to get married. It's like, after all these years, after three engagements, he's finally surrendering to who he is, to what makes him ( ... )

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nikka14 January 30 2014, 13:56:26 UTC
Hiiiii person you great person I love you let me kiss you!!!hahaha I'm sorry I only read just now...but why would you say I wouldn't like it? I like it a looooot!!! Thank you very much! I really can't remember my prompts haha but I have a faint guess of what it was. I think I typed crazy stuff there and you turned it into something great.

And baek's struggle...like the first parts really got to me, the struggle with work, what exactly to do with life and doing what is the norm (getting married, having work because you have to work, etc) and luckily for baek he had found his self, his happiness huhu

Thanks again! Sorry for the crazy prompts, you probably never understood half of what I wrote hahaha

Kudos my friend! *throws myself at you* oh wait no just hearts I'm too heavy hahaha

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