you say your lines and i’ll say mine

Jan 25, 2014 20:32

Title: you say your lines and i'll say mine
Author: Anonymous until 1/30/14
For: aurics
Pairing: Baekhyun/Kai [side: Luhan/Suho]
Word Count: 5,164
Summary: Baekhyun and his friends are making a movie of their own to kill time during the summer. It's a lot of work, especially when Baekhyun is acting alongside his biggest crush ever and the camera keeps ( Read more... )

this is breakfast, pairing: luhan/suho, pairing: baekhyun/kai, rating: g

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rossell January 26 2014, 16:51:10 UTC
Aww i love this
I like the plot and story flow
I knew Jongin likes Baekhyun since he volunteer to be the other lead
Thanks for writing and sharing the story

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aurics January 26 2014, 16:53:07 UTC
SPOT OH MY GOD LET ME COME BACK WHEN I'M DONE ROLLING AROUND BECAUSE you chose the fluff prompt ksjajvbmvjsd

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aurics January 28 2014, 16:43:51 UTC
sobs this was everything i wanted and so much more ;uuuu; i love baekhyun's relationship with his friends THEY ARE SO STUPID AND DUMB TOGETHER i can totally picture them doing stupid shit together (esp matchmaking (i mean OFC THEY WOULD)

“Sure,” he heard himself muttering. “Of course.”
Anything for you.
i was like YESSS BAEKHYUN'S FIRST SET OF WALLS CRUMBLING DOWN

“He’s trying to poison me with this bowl of sludge he calls chocolate cake batter.”
LMFAO BOWL OF SLUDGE istg

“They’re cute,” Jongin suddenly said without turning around. “Like you.”
I SQUEALED SO HARD NO YOU DON'T DO THIS KIM JONGIN ((AUTHOR)) NO

and then their ~fight~ happened just as they were warming up to each other and i could hear my heart breaking because no no NO this is all a misunderstanding ;__;

and i love how you made baekhyun think their relationship was just on-screen and everything because it's very bittersweet I WAS PRAYING FOR A HAPPY ENDING AND YOU DIDN'T DISAPPOINT ME

i especially love this line: He also wanted such a future to stop being a mere ( ... )

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gdgdbaby January 26 2014, 17:28:52 UTC
ahhh this was beyond adorable!! >3< i loved how you started out with chinguline shenanigans and broadened it to include the rest of exo, your dialogue was so on point and all the little interactions between the boys were delightful, deadpan kyungsoo, earnest chanyeol, maknaeline being dumb together. fluffy summer fic is my favorite and the guys are so wonderfully high school, i love it ;~; kai is so cute here!! baekhyun's crush is so funny because he's so despairing about it and of course chen's the one who gets the ball rolling :') tysm for writing this! ♥

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byunbaekhyun February 3 2014, 14:33:27 UTC
I am choking on fluff!!! Gaaaaaah. Thank you for the adorable story!

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suitandkai June 26 2015, 00:02:00 UTC
i dont know if you did it on purpose or on accident but
"The night was young and so were they."
was that a nicki minaj reference?? because in the night is still young she sings
"The night is still young and so are we."

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