The Winner Takes It All

[paradisist]

Title: The Winner Takes It All
Author: Anonymous until 1/30/14
For: baekhannies
Pairing: Baekhyun/Chanyeol
Word Count: 7,192
Summary: When you spend your life living in someone else’s shadow, it’s hard to tell when the light is shining on you.
Warnings: language
Rating: PG-13

Comments

[baekhannies]

SPOT ♡

[baekhannies]

OMG THIS IS PERFECT!!!!!+ fist of all, thank you so much for writing this and for using that prompt! i love high school!aus and can i say how wonderful you are??? because this is just the cutest baekyeol i've ever read and omg i'll be in tears here soon /sobs

i really really loved it, i loved how you put the way baekhyun felt towards the pressure from his parents and the way chanyeol was always happy and not so obvious about his /secret/ crush on baekhyun♡

and i was really amazed by the acience fair and how you exlained everything even if the ideas of the works weren't yours!!!! hahaha i'm sure you did your best in your science fair tho? but i know how you fell, mine isn't so /hard/ or anything like this but i surely hate to do projects and anything at all for it haha xD

thank you for this wonderful fic! love you!!!!!♡

[hopeandmemory]

sooooo i just realized i never responded to this comment and i feel kinda bad, lmfao. i know you commented when i cross-posted it to my personal journal and i responded to that, but still!!

i think a few weeks before i read this i'd seen an article about interesting science fair projects because some of the students i worked with were doing science fair projects, so that's kind of how i got the idea for this. the internet is such a treasure trove of neat ideas, though!

chanyeol trying to play it cool is so him, haha. HE AIN'T COOL AT ALL.

anyway, i'm still really glad you enjoyed this, four or five months after the fact. :)

[chansoos]

I really liked the way everything was put. And how nice Chanyeol was, I can totally imagine Baekhyun being like that and Luhan made me laugh quite a lot.
Thanks for writing it. It was pretty awesome

[hopeandmemory]

i know this comment is like four months late but i just wanted to thank you for reading this silly little story. i'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

[yeolie]

omg this was great!!!
I ush dont read hfs aus but I loved this. *-*

baek rly was awful like zero chill but it was understandable that he was pressured u-u
omg when baeks dad was like even park can't get you outta second place, noooooo poor baby.
the ending was also excellent. it was cool how you made it realistic. like baeks not gonna suddenly like cy just cause cy likes him. I'm glad he wanted to try this tho.

[hopeandmemory]

but HS aus are so good!!! maybe i just have a sick fondness for school uniforms ugh im trash

anyway whoops i forgot to respond to this for like 4 months BUT i appreciate the comment! baekhyun was so awful in this fic, lmao. wayyyy too type A. it's a bad way to be (i know from experience but luckily my mom is way more chill than baek's parents).

i thought it would be silly for baek to just be like "WOW SUDDENLY I LOVE U" after all that drama but yeah i think he matured a little by the end and i think he needed to be at someone else's mercy because frankly he's a control freak and someone else needs to take the reins once in a while.

ANYWAY. thx for reading :33

[fooddydooddy]

I feel like punching the sense out of Baek's parents like whyyyy!!! Poor bb Baek, and also poor bb Chanyeol. He's so confident I almost believe they'd win that science fair too lol. I was so nervous when I read the announcement part and I said to myself wtf dude, it's always amaze me how I let a fanfic drive my heart u__u

"The only reason people are upset is because Kris is upset and everyone’s scared of Kris..." : ♡♡♡♡♡

Thank you for sharing & writing ^v^

[hopeandmemory]

sorry for the four-months-late response, lmao. i totally forgot these comments were still here. -_______-

baek's parents are awful but parents like that exist. luckily mine aren't like that, but still. :(

chanyeol was way too nice lmfao baek didn't deserve him!!

thanks for reading, i'm really glad you took the time to comment and i'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)

[hopeandmemory]

i know this response is four months late so bear with me!! haha. (p.s. i love your icon omg he's too freaking cute)

chanyeol is one of my favorite exos to write, honestly! he's so easy to read, he seems like the kinda kid who wears his heart on his sleeve so it feels easier to write him.

thanks for reading, apologies for responding so belatedly. ;~~; glad you liked it!!