Realistic Chapter 11

[theartoffic]

And we're finally getting closer to the end of this story ;)

Title: Realistic - Chapter 11/14
Author: theartoffic
Type: LOTR RPS AU
Pairing: Orlando/Elijah
Rating: Adult

Summary: In the 21st century Artificial Intelligence is still in its infancy, some scientists toy with the idea of creating robots that look, and act, and think like human beings; in the

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[verangel]

Sometimes I wish I would just say...it was absolutely fantastic and I loved it and could leave it there. I couldn't so I didn't reply, read it at work left it with markups of love at work (thank god turned upside down since I had to stay home with sick child the next day). I hate excuses, especially when I read something like this. I have had a few glasses a wine, have confirmation practice and confirmation on Sunday for my middle sweetheart (14).
BUT, the beginning started my notes on Monday night. "the glorious images" after reading of Orlando wet and naked in front of Elijah. No control left! The sex perfect and the way they are so naturally loving to each other is bliss when you think of what Elijah has been through. I wonder about Orli. I think he has had a hard time in life. He wants to love so badly. Tara and Ron...I LOVE them. Even when Tara sticks her foot in her mouth, Ron can say it and it makes it so freakin human for them all. You know they adore Elijah and think of him as real with Orlando. 10 million dollars...holy freakin crap! Still gets shivers imagining someone giving that to me. Her reaction was perfect and the dialogue was exactly what I would have been saying.
Elijah and a little lobster with his sweet butter. *shivers* visibly.
"'Yes.' If only Orlando could understand the depth behind that one word answer." I did and I felt it coming. Then Orlando and his playful love for Elijah. He is so deeply in love with him. That flick of his wet tongue against the curve of Elijah's ear warmed me totally. Followed by the sweet moment of Elijah playing with the child while Orlando observed him unknowingly. So many arms and legs and careful protection.
Paul. I have such a bad feeling here. It curdles my insides every time I read about him from the time he touched Elijah's arm and made Elijah instinctivly withdraw. That is a word that just hit me. Elijah was instictive. There is nothing robotic about that. He is so special. Paul is a danger. He was offensive.
The RING! I never saw that coming. I really didn't. BUT I adore you for this special treat. Orlando had the ring made for Elijah. A connection, a token of his love for him that Elijah would see and remember. Always there. I have these types of memories. They are priceless. It was a gorgeous and wonderful gift. I was so glad that ring wasn't Veronica's. I should have had more faith in Orlando. Its what his character screams in this. Have faith in me. It made me almost feel guilty that I questioned the ring.
It was all so wonderful. I want to give my heart when I read things this good, but the delay makes you think I don't care. I do and I want the next part soon. Pretty greedy for the delay in my simple comment. I will be gone from 3 April to 11 April. Florida with the kids. We haven't in so long. YOu are NOT allowed to post a chapter that week. I am hoping for one before though. *grins lovingly*
Hugs you close xoxoxo v

[theartoffic]

zomg honey! I knew you were just busy or something! I'm glad you left the story face down too hehehehhe. awww confirmation! you're going to have a busy weekend!

I am so, so very glad you liked it! And your feedback ... you've no idea what it means to me to have you take me through it as you read it. There is really nothing like it! You are so special to me!!! And because of that I'm going to tell you two things. First, I'm pretty much posting the rest of this story this weekend. I'm still up now cos I'm getting chapter 12 ready to post. And Second, you might want to wait until it's all posted to finish reading it. I don't want you to hate me *g*.

So you'll have it all way before your trip! Florida! You lucky girl!! I hope that the weather is wonderful for you! and you get to relax!

Okay, I'm going to go post chapter 12 now. <3's omg.

[verangel]

You're going to hurt me on this one aren't you!? Evil Paul is going to strike and abuse poor Elijah? I may peak at a few comments before I read. hugs you. much loves xoxoxo v

[theartoffic]

errr probably but ... well, you'll see ;) I swear, I'll make it all better in the end tho *loves*

[mother2012]

Do you have any freakin' idea what wonderful feedback you give? I would do that if I could!

[verangel]

I give so little here and appreciate these stories so much. They are my escape. It is all I can give and I can't seem to help it. I am so freakin grateful for the time these wonderful people give to putting a thought and heart into words on screen. Its amazing. I have tried, done a few but so small and it took so much!
hugs you and thank you for this comment. It really meant a lot to me in a funky way. I think you know what I mean. hugs you and hopes things are going well. xoxoxox v