lover, you should've come over

[douc]

lover, you should've come over
~ 5,970 w, pg13, (kai/sulli + taemin)
Traditionally, Jinri kisses Taemin good morning and Jongin good night.

■ for onceuponataem, don't ask me why I'd write something for such a bully like her..jks, jks, I adore you naomi (sometimes)
■ inspired by the jeff buckley's song■ I have a feeling I'll eventually end up writing something

Comments

[douc]

spot for onceuponataem ♥

[bollywoodrecord]

my spot hehehehehehehe

[bollywoodrecord]

i think i want to cry

tbh i wanted to ship jongin and jinri a lot but like taemin's drunkenness and his depression just make him so vulnerable and heartbreaking and even though i think its unfair of me to ask for jinri to continue taking care of the boyfriend she originally loved i just died on the inside when she left him

[douc]

I was so conflicted writing this cause I ship jinri with both boys, still do /cries

BUT SHE DID IT FOR HERSELF, LIBERATING GUYS

[kurdoodle]

i honestly don't know how you do this, yuri. all the intricacies and how conflicted jinri is, jongin's sad unrequited love and taekai best-friend-ery but poor taemin's all depressed and jinri's caught in the middle of it all. this was somehow quite poetic, and i just...wow. kai/sulli is so pretty and i loved the side!sestal ahaha ♥ ot5 is still always the best.

“You tell me all the time that I don’t understand how tired you are but, I do,” she tells him with a bitter sweet smile, “I’m tired enough just by trying to fix you, turn the clock and bring the boy I love back.”

awhh ;_; that was a sad break up, but it needed to be done sighh what if this was real life?!
thanks for sharing ♥

[douc]

IF THIS WAS REAL LIFE, IT WOULD DESTROY ME CAUSE I SWEAR TAEMIN AND SULLI DID DATE AT SOME POINT???!!

[scarredknees]

goood i love this! this broken ot3 is gorgeous and sad. i feel for all three of them :( but anyway thank you for writing this!! ❤ it was a fantastic read ❤

[douc]

thank you for reason and ugh yes to broken!ot3

[buckwilds]

i just can't control my feelings, this is so beautiful. it's hurting me reading how jinri always tried to be there until she could watch taemin fixing himself when he's surely had no intention to. but finally she did it for her own good like IT'S ABOUT TIME, JINRI. wow your fic speaks a lot about relationships nowadays, really, i wish more people from outside the fandom could read it too!

look at me blabbering all these stuffs lmao sorry, i just love this piece!
thank you for writing this :)

[douc]

yeah, I feel like this fic isn't really focused on a particular couple but more on Jinri herself, just doing it for herself and finally finding happiness after being in a painful relationship for so long.

you are not blabbering at all and thank you for reading and commenting xx