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Jul 08, 2010 12:54

Title: Her Hands

Characters: Paul, Bella/Jacob

Rating: T (for suggestive content and language)
Summary: Paul asks for Bella’s help.

Validation Beta: majestamoniet

majestamoniet for my banner!

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status: completed, one shot, genre: humor, rating: t

Comments 21

audreyii_fic July 8 2010, 22:05:56 UTC

You. Have. No. Idea. How. Much. I. Needed. That.

Cute, fun, sweet, and utterly original. Great job.

pnai_87 July 8 2010, 23:32:33 UTC

Thank you! I'm trying to get a feel for each character with these oneshots, so that my multi-chapter project doesn't suck. I was surprised how easy it was to use bad language when I set it in Paul's point of view, and how hard it was to keep it in his point of view by not talking like myself. Does that make sense?

majestamoniet July 8 2010, 23:45:23 UTC

The stiffness made it difficult to concentrate, and the constant stabs of pain messed with his rhythm. Not that the girl noticed, he was just that good.

lol. Paul is such a cocky douche.

Thanks for sharing this! I thought it was funny and super sweet. :D

pnai_87 July 8 2010, 23:51:56 UTC

LOL, thank you. Want to know what inspired this? There was this episode of Bones that Angela and Hodgins were in a jail cell together, and he was giving her a massage. She was moaning like how Emily was. It twas a lot of fun to write.

majestamoniet July 8 2010, 23:57:29 UTC

I luv bones! Sweets is my man. :)

There are so many episodes I haven't seen (like the one you mentioned), and I need to fix that this summer.

dredhedred July 9 2010, 00:25:51 UTC

Love it!

Arrogant Paul turned into a lapdog. Brilliant!

pnai_87 July 9 2010, 07:22:02 UTC

Thanks. A massage is supposed to very relaxing, never had one myself, and I figured stress and tension have a big affect on somebody's temper. ^_^

dredhedred July 10 2010, 23:29:00 UTC

Never had a massage? Oh hon, you need to remedy that straight away!

But then I could well be biased. I work as a shiatsu practitioner in real life - which is a form of Japanese bodywork (massage), not a small, irritating dog.

writerfreek July 9 2010, 04:19:44 UTC

that was really fun to read!!! great job bb!

pnai_87 July 9 2010, 07:23:05 UTC

Have I thanked you yet for your awesome icon? Thank you! What's BB?

writerfreek July 10 2010, 03:12:02 UTC

haha i can't remember who made this but the credit is in my icons, I love yours too!!

bb means baby, its just cute!

gravity_moved July 9 2010, 05:13:13 UTC

Oooh, great little story - thoroughly enjoyed! :)

pnai_87 July 9 2010, 07:25:37 UTC

Now, your icon made me LOL. I'm glad you liked it. Hope you enjoy my other stuff as well ^_^