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the_tenzo

Fic Commentary: Forgetfulness

Sep 16, 2010 21:14

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( Commentary for Forgetfulness, written for anon_aspasia. Contains snogging. )

Comments 5

2nd2ndalto September 17 2010, 03:05:41 UTC

Oh, interesting concept! Apparently Ten and Rose like first times, too.

I'm never sure what to do with POVs, so I tend to choose one and stick to it unwaveringly.

...all legs and arms and rather large feet stuck in to canvass trainers. The brown suit he wore was quite mod, and his hair was teetering right on that dicey line between intentional bed head and actual bed head. Nice, very nice.

What's an Ikea Love Scene? Swedish? Assembled with an allen-key?

LOL palate-licking! I've always wondered about that too - I thought maybe it was just me!

*uses TARDIS in Scotland icon in honour of sexy Scottish accents*

papilio_luna September 17 2010, 14:34:06 UTC

An Ikea Love Scene is one where the description of it is like the instructions that come with flat-pack furniture. First this, then that, then this, then flip it over, the insert tab A into slot B, etc...

I don't think it's just you with the kissing thing. I think it's one of those porny tropes that just gets passed around. People read it and they stick it in their own stories without thinking. But if anyone ever stroked the roof of my mouth with their tongue? They'd be out the door so fast their head would spin. That is gross! Ditto with the tongue-battling.

2nd2ndalto September 17 2010, 22:26:24 UTC

OMG THE TONGUE BATTLING! NO THANK YOU.

I'm so new to all of this - the fic, the fandom, the porn... but you're right. There are SO porny tropes! And let's not forget the everyone-orgasms-every-time school of intercourse.

anon_aspasia September 17 2010, 03:07:15 UTC

Thanks! You answered many of the things I was curious about, but there's still one remaining: you reference "Tennantisms" as a plural in the description. Even as someone who's newer to the fandom, I caught the "two drinks and I'm anybody's" (and had the same evil thoughts as the rest of you pervs), but were there others?

the_tenzo September 17 2010, 14:36:38 UTC

Hm, I don't think there are more than just the one. Not that I caught, at least. Perhaps there had been in earlier drafts? I can't remember. This fic seems like ancient history to me now!