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the_tenzo

Gravity (1/1)

Jul 13, 2009 07:10

Title: Gravity (1/1)
Rating: All Ages
Characters/Pairings: Rose (implied Ten II/Rose, Ten)
Word Count: 986
Summary: One man her lover, the other her best friend-how can Rose tell the difference?
A/N: Written for Round 2.02 of writerinatardis . The prompt was: "The difference between the almost right word and the right word is really a large matter -- 'tis the ( Read more... )

character(s): ten2/rose, fic: gravity, !writerinatardis, genre: au, length: one-shot

Comments 6

fid_gin July 13 2009, 12:43:03 UTC

Wow, very pretty! I like Rose communing with the Gravity god. Rose is the type of person who thinks to stop to speak to plants, werewolves, gods, etc. It's amazing how often they'll answer if you just ask. :)

the_tenzo July 13 2009, 14:21:11 UTC

Thanks! TBH I was a bit flaily and lost with that prompt. But at least I didn't wind up with a -2 like last time! Phew!

10_point_5 July 13 2009, 14:26:33 UTC

Awww, just lovely! Petty human questions that consume her nonetheless, exactly right. I love what she's worried about, and that she's worried about it. And I love that the god does not speak or manifest but the idea comes to her in the end. *huggles them all*

Edited because this was about shipping, not shopping.

klb89 July 14 2009, 01:53:00 UTC

That was cool-

kholly July 14 2009, 03:26:41 UTC

I was annoyed with myself because I started reading this round and then got distracted and forgot to go back and finish until it was over.

I liked this one a lot. It feels very honest that Rose would be having these questions. It's a nice interpretation of the prompt too. Glad you passed through to the next round.

helygen July 15 2009, 23:08:41 UTC

Wow. This is gorgeous, and it's brought tears to my eyes.

I love the beautifully descriptive analogies of the lightning and the firefly. You're a genius!