Title: Everybody Knows Rating: PG-13 Pairings: Implied Hannibal/Face, OCs Warnings: Violence Disclaimer: I own nothing. Sadface. Summary: He knows the type Notes: Written for this prompt on a_team_kink, which owns my soul.
I came here to tell you that it was a good story, and that you've done a great job with movie!Face, but I seem to have become completely distracted by the quotes at the side of the page. Trapper! O'Neill! Red Dwarf!
OK, this was really awesome. I *love* outsider POV, and I really liked that you made Mike Yarrow come across as an actual soldier -- sucking it up and doing his job even when he disapproves. Wonderful characterization. Great job on this whole thing.
Yes, thank you! I wanted him to come across as an ordinary guy with relatively reasonable doubts, not...the antichrist, as unsympathetic characters in fic have a habit of being XD I'm really glad it worked for you.
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Great job! I love a bystander's POV and even though I haven't seen the movie yet, this worked just as well with the series in mind. A few typos could be cleaned up (Talking=taking), but all in all I liked it very much!
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But, yeah. Nice work with the story too. ;)
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Oliver is, though. :)
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And yes. Yes he is.
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Also, the kink meme owns my soul as well.
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The kink meme rules all. We are merely its servants.
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A few typos could be cleaned up (Talking=taking), but all in all I liked it very much!
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