(Ch.25)I gots a question,Not that I don't love that Clark's first love is Chloe. But even at the beginning wasn't Clark in love with Lana, before Chloe came in? Or was it just a crush? I rlly love how u break down the senses and express it with Clark's desperation as well as his alien heritage. Another question since earlier Jonathan asked Clark to help with the tractor, and well Clark obviously knows about his abilities, have they still not told him about the spaceship? Cuz sometimes it just seems that he doesn't rlly kno where it all develops. I rlly like this line: "One was Chloe Sullivan; she had him wrapped around her lil' finger". muahaha how cte :). Oh man now ur making me rlly nervous. CK is not up for heroics this time. This worries me so much:"Climbing over the side, the monster saw Chloe, splayed out, passed out, and suddenly seeing The Tall One fall and hearing him hit the ground was not as satisfying as what he had in mind for The Blonde." WOw the guardian angel thing was so cute and I feel bad Clark feels like he doesn't have one :(. Dude ur last line in this chapter gave me the goosebumps and a huge grin. AWESOME!! & thnk god Clark is there before Chloe got molested :( (Ch.26)GO CLARK! Oh man that sucks. Knuckle damage, Clark sure is getting beat. OH man Clark is so brave. Beside his Kryptonian body being able to take certain blows man even the way ur hitting is is crazy (love it thou, the details and the blows r awesome!) but I LOVE how he keeps thinking of Chloe to keep on fighting. A noble Hero, trying to save his lady. Sweet ;] Crap! I'm not sure if Clark is gonna start feeling guilty about incinerating the arm off but that's HOT! Plus I think ur gonna let Clark develop flying early, that's even cooler! Aww man even after all the evil i still feel bad for Beppo :(. It's hilarious that her intellectual and snark do always jump in, but yea i don't doubt Clark will tell her his secret soon :P YES THE KISS! IS IT THE KISS??? (Ch.27)Take Chloe's mind to stop it LMAO! I love how u take her train of thought so out there, it's hilarious. Love how Clark comforts her too, so cute :). YES THE KISS!!!*throws fist up in air* Whadahu? So in ur story Chloe is a source of type? That's pretty cool man! I rlly love how u put their kiss into a larger sense too, how Chloe heals and now Clark is flying. That is so unique and cool, awesome! aww the lyrics to that song were beautiful!
(Ch.26)GO CLARK! Oh man that sucks. Knuckle damage, Clark sure is getting beat. OH man Clark is so brave. Beside his Kryptonian body being able to take certain blows man even the way ur hitting is is crazy (love it thou, the details and the blows r awesome!) but I LOVE how he keeps thinking of Chloe to keep on fighting. A noble Hero, trying to save his lady. Sweet ;] Crap! I'm not sure if Clark is gonna start feeling guilty about incinerating the arm off but that's HOT! Plus I think ur gonna let Clark develop flying early, that's even cooler! Aww man even after all the evil i still feel bad for Beppo :(. It's hilarious that her intellectual and snark do always jump in, but yea i don't doubt Clark will tell her his secret soon :P YES THE KISS! IS IT THE KISS???
(Ch.27)Take Chloe's mind to stop it LMAO! I love how u take her train of thought so out there, it's hilarious. Love how Clark comforts her too, so cute :). YES THE KISS!!!*throws fist up in air* Whadahu? So in ur story Chloe is a source of type? That's pretty cool man! I rlly love how u put their kiss into a larger sense too, how Chloe heals and now Clark is flying. That is so unique and cool, awesome! aww the lyrics to that song were beautiful!
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