FF100 (Sound)

[the_rocklobster]

Title: Oh, It is Love
Fandom: The OC
Characters: Anna Stern/Zach Stevens
Prompt: Sound
Word Count: 191
Rating: G
Author's Note: I didn't include a summary; everything I could think of sounded cheesy. It's a FF100 fic, centered around the idea of love at first sight. The unnamed boy is, obviously, Zach. As... yes, that's what my fic claim is.

Comments

[mel39]

Very nice Manda. You've used some lovely phrases, particularly her fingertips paint the air. and The air is all peanuts and cheap beer . Very evocative.

[the_rocklobster]

Thanks, sweets! =D

[oc_gambit2]

I must agree wholeheartedly with mel- you captured this moment so briefly, so vividly. I really enjoyed this.

[the_rocklobster]

Aww, thank you so much!