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Desperate times by angw

Jan 13, 2009 21:26

Challenge #1

Title: Desperate times
Author: angw
Rating: PG
Characters: Rodney, Teyla, Sheppard, Ronon
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Disclaimer: Not mine. Never was, never will be. *sigh*
Spoilers: None
Summary: Stuck in a mine shaft Ro dney has to make a choice to survive.

A/N - thanks to astrobleme_99 and sgatazmy for giving me much needed advice.

Prompt: Cave In
( Rodney groaned... )

challenge #1

Comments 8

nuetronorange January 13 2009, 11:45:50 UTC

Great Rodney whump, loved it, brave Rodney both for yelling the warning and the attempt to get free.

I liked the design of the story, parts in the present and parts in the past.

And of course its John that finds him first.

Loved it, thanks.

angw January 14 2009, 07:19:58 UTC

Thanks.

I don't think I would want to be in that kind of situation. I've watched the TV real life survival stories and wondered how people coped.

wildcat88 January 13 2009, 16:43:37 UTC

That gave me chills! A nice twist to add to the cave-in.

angw January 14 2009, 07:21:43 UTC

Thank you. Chills are good :)

tzzzz January 13 2009, 21:06:56 UTC

I enjoyed that. Thanks for writing.

angw January 14 2009, 07:20:48 UTC

Cheers. Glad you enjoyed it.

tridget August 13 2009, 05:10:16 UTC

Guess I missed this story when it was posted. I really enjoyed it. It was wonderfully chilling with a good ending.

angw August 13 2009, 05:57:37 UTC

Thanks.