Dirty Service

[the_rant_girl]

Title: Dirty Service
Characters: Jensen/Jared, Danneel/Chris
Rating: NC-17
Medium: Fic
Word Count: 3753
Summary: Jared's on his way to an interview when his car breaks down and he gets rescued by super hot mechanic!Danneel, and then he meets Jensen.

A/N: Written for my love big_heart_june for her birthday and for her prompt: Mechanic!Jensen and customer!Jared

Comments

[tmn1966]

First off, I love how much Jared is into his car - is monogamous to her. :D

And of course, Danneel's entrance is perfect and I love the line that Jared thought that staring at her boobs would get a right hook for his trouble. LOL

I agree with June... Jared's first look at Jensen is drool worthy. You painted quite a picture there, missy, in his overalls and white t-shirt.

Jared wasn't having a good day there, banging his head on the hood of his car, and then getting his foot caught and haha I love the reflex of saying "I'm okay." Jared may have wanted the earth to swallow him up, but it just makes him that much more adorable.

I love Jensen's and Danneel's banter, especially Danneel's line:

“Yes but you’re the one staring all forlornly into the abyss of love.”

This paragraph is made of awesome because I can so see this happening:

Jensen would probably have been content enough to just let the radio fill the space between them, but of course Jared kept trying to bridge the gap anyway. Jensen to his credit really seemed to listen and he even offered responses to Jared’s babbling but then Jared would somehow end up dead ending the topic and have to start all over again, find something new to talk about.

And I still love how you phrased this - so perfect!:

There had been a couple of moments where Jared had been pretty convinced that Jensen was going to kiss him, butterflies erupting in his stomach, but the last few inches between them remained untaken.

I didn't think it was possible for you to make Jared even more adorable, but you did! That he played with Kilo until the kitty fell asleep then left the apartment so he wouldn't disturb her. I agree with Jensen... entirely too cute!!!

And I love that Jared was the one that kicked things off by letting it out that he wanted to lick Jensen - all over! Very hot scene, honey. The dirty talk and Jensen being all sexy with the 'baby's and that they couldn't wait, had to have what they could right there in the garage. But at least there's round two - I'm sure Kilo will find a corner far from the bedroom so she want have to listen to all those noises they'll be making. LOL

Great job with this, sweetie! <333

Now, I'm gonna go help Danneel take that awesome car... just for a drive. We'll bring it back. Not heading for the border at all. Promise. ;P

[the_rant_girl]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! YOOOUUUUUUUUUU! *tackles you to the ground and smishes and snuggles* oh my god! You really weren't kidding about the properly huh? GUH! THANK YOU FOR ALWAYS LOVING ALL THE THINGS! And well you know Jared is a loyal kind of guy he's not going to give up on what he loves most most dear, lol

And well you know Danneel wouldn't have actually punched him lol, but I like her giving off badass vibes and Jared feeling them haha

and I love that you love Jared's adorkableness and heee for Jensen/Danneel banter love, you do know how much I love writing their themness HAHA

And thank you sweetie for letting me know that you liked my phraseology on that line *smooches* and =DDDDDD for kitty lovings!

And of course you do know how much it means to me that you found the sexy times sexy haha I can never resist sticking the baby's in, June loves them for one thing lol and I don't know I like having it be part of sex, because like obviously they would never use that word elsewhere, because no haha

BWA HA! I figured Jensen would shut Kilo in the kitchen whilst, you know haha, but of course he'd get up to let her out afterwards lol

and LMFAO riiiiight, sure. A likely story. *hides the keys* LOL ;P <333333333333333333333333333333333333333