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Broken Promises (PG13)

Mar 23, 2006 17:41

Title: Broken Promises
Author: lvs2read
Rating: PG13
Characters: Wash, Zoë, Mal, Simon, River, crew peripherally
Pairing: Mal/Simon, Wash/Zoë
Timeline: This AU story takes place 5 years after "Serenity, the Pilot."
Summary: How does Mal take the news of Zoë's pregnancy?
Disclaimer: Don't own it, never did, never will--just having fun playing.

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lvs2read March 23 2006, 23:43:04 UTC

Hee! I'll look forward to it. *g*

ladynyxchaos March 24 2006, 00:01:52 UTC

Ahhh! Stupid Mal! Poor Simon!
I have just fallen in love with the boys even more.

lvs2read March 24 2006, 00:22:45 UTC

Thanks! They are so easy to love! *g*

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lvs2read March 24 2006, 14:24:32 UTC

Nah, I don't hate you!

Simon leaving--Yeah, I know the whole leaving River behind thing. However, remember that this takes place in the context of my big story, wherein it's been hinted that River and Kaylee are together. So he might be willing to leave her behind. OTOH, I'm with Wash, I think leaving was just a threat. He'd tried everything else he could think of in the weeks before (even if I didn't write about it *g*), so decided to employ drastic measures ( ... )

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lvs2read March 24 2006, 22:51:37 UTC

Yeah, I can. Just too lazy. *g* BTW, I noticed I did have Zoe use dear at least once. Nitpicking--I know! *g*

TTYL

apieceofcake March 24 2006, 13:25:26 UTC

Very nice, I like angst..LOL!

lvs2read March 24 2006, 14:32:43 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I'm not so good with angst. Nice to know I got it right. *g*

ktxx March 27 2006, 20:07:45 UTC

ok not sure how i missed this one but ooooo good angst! I was worried Simon would leave, even though i knew he wouldn't! I think the whole thing was very Mal and Wash was great too but i did think that Simon should have considered River a little more... maybe... hmmm can't make up my mind. I liked River taking out Mal that was a nice touch, kinda knocking sense into him!
ktxx

lvs2read March 27 2006, 20:16:14 UTC

Glad you thought the angst was good! It's so easy for me to write fluff, angst took some doing. *g*

Simon considering River...Fair enough. I'm getting that from a few people. It's definitely something I'll keep in mind for any future efforts.

Glad you like action!River. *g* No way was she gonna let Mal screw things up. *bg*