my attempt at writing poetry while being drunk

[the_only_remedy]

when im with you
all else fades to black
you stand there
shining like a light
on a dark hidden river
like a beacon
you call my heart
calling me closer
making me fall deeper
im basking in your light
feeling its warmth
ive never felt so whole
i give in completely
you have control of me
i feel so safe and warm
its then i know that i am yours.

i dont know.. but right now thats how i feel. i dont know if its any good, or if u guys will like it.. but i may have never spoken truer words...

right now, i love it. we shall see how i feel tomorrow.