LOOKIT, A SHOOTING STAR!

Aug 12, 2010 18:03


Anyone going to see the shooting stars tonight? They're supposed to peak at about midnight and run until 5 am or so with at least one shooting star each minute (last year it was more like seven or ten each minute, and that was with the clouds and the moon that didn't know when to go the hell away).

So tonight mom, The Boy and I are going out to Cap. Fed. Sandstone Amp. Theater where there's no city lights or trees to obscure the view, and we're going to make wishes on the falling stars.

Like Jae and I did last year at the house that no longer belongs to her. ...

...... JAE-HEART-LOVE-WOMAN-LADY! I WANT WAFFLES. :|

Seriously. I haven't been able to stomach anything except liquids for days. ... And I want waffles soooooo damn baaaad....

Uhh... So, I'm bored. Obviously. I'm sure you can tell.

It's hot outside, my arm hurts (thank you Kyun-kitten and dysfunctional computer cord!), my leg hurts (thank you muscle aches!), my head hurts (THANK YOU HEATWAVE!), and my side/belly hurts (Kyun-kitten.... I am NOT your scratching post!!). So I'm at the library working on this new story of mine. It was originally supposed to be part of a drabble set that I'd been planning... But I somehow found a plot (OMG, I know, right?! Me! A plot!) and now that I sorta see where it's going, I love it. ... Yeeah, I know. >> I'ma loser. But people love me for beign me, so I don't care what you think. <3

Uhm. I should be muddling through heaps of college crap. ... Or packing. ... I leave in less than two weeks. .... Buuu~t I wanna write.

So here I am!

And, because I'm both crazy and impatient to know what people think, here's a sneak peak! (Don't tell Jae though. She's my hellishly-awesome beta. She gets to decide whether I cut it or keep it and whether it goes with the drabble set or not.)

The once-drabble-now-I-dunno-what is titaled "Abandon". The following paragraphs have been pulled from the unfinished document and may therefore be changed before the end result is complete. (They probably won't be though. Maybe wording, if even that.)

`*`

There was a tug at his sleeve, and Donghae turned, venomous words on the tip of his tongue. then his eyes met another's, and for a long, long moment he was lost.

"Who are you?" Donghae managed some time later, voice nothing mroe than a breathy whisper.

"A friend."

Even though Donghae wouldn't remember ever meeting someone with such vibrantly red hair, there was something in the back of his mind calmly agreeing that yes, he did know this person, even if he couldn't quite remember them.

---

"He abandoned me," Doinghae murmured, his voice a ghost of a whisper. "They all abandoned me."

The red-headgave him a pained smile. "It wasn't their choice."

-----

Those are two of my favorite parts of the whole thing. It'd already four pages long. ... And I've got... six more sectiosn to write, six bridges from one part to another. Some will only be a paragraph or so while others could be half a page in and of themselves. *weak grin* I know. I'm such a loser.

But anyway. If you like it, lemme know. :] I hope to finish it tonight (I actually wrote a majority of it around 3 this morning when I should've been sleeping. ... On my ipod. XDD). If not tonight, then definitely tomorrow.

!personal, title: abandon

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