Wow dammit BEN WHY DO YOU HAVE TO BE SUCH A DOUCHE!
I don't think Finn sent the e-mail but the poor dude is conflicted. Hopefully Maritza could help him work things out. I do think they'd be cute together but doesn't she have a boyfriend? Hrmmmmmmmmmm.....
Claire and Colton --- just a little while longer you two! I'm hoping they can keep themselves safe just until Claire graduates. Damn drama!
I totally understand the self esteem issues. For what it's worth, I think you're a wonderful writer! It's always a pleasure reading your chapters. :)
LMAO I am eternally amused that Ben's new nickname is Douche. I love it.
She DID have a boyfriend. You're very right!! (Wow, good job!) But that was several months ago, and we are to assume that it did not pan out as planned. ;)
Damn drama ruins EVERYTHING doesn't it??
... ::blushes:: thank you!! I am so pleased someone like you even -reads- my stuff, let alone actually -likes- it... :)
"someone like you"... lol, nah we're a bunch of us the same breed. People into their sims too much and just want to tell a story. The McTavishams are wonderful in their own light and that's the damn truth. :D
Well, I'm glad that Maritza may no longer have a boyfriend. I think she can help Finn a lot, but I wouldn't want him to get caught in another triangle again. :)
That damn Ben and his meddling. Finn would never do anything so vindictive to someone he cared about, as Claire thought and as Maritza pointed out. Fortunately, if Claire ends up confronting Finn about this, then it should be fairly obvious to her that he didn't do it, right? Right? *is hopeful*
In any case, I'm not too worried about these two in the long run. Claire doesn't have much longer to go, and then they can be together. If only Ben didn't have to make this last stretch so difficult for them... :(
LMAO Van... yeah that about describes the situation, doesn't it??
Ben is, as everyone is affectionately calling him, a Douche... and he is most definitely meddling his skinny little butt off. Hopefully we will find out the reason semi-soonish.
Ben is eeeevil. And I feel bad for Finn, because Claire and Colton will blame him... I ship C/C so much, but now I think Finn deserves to be happy, since he was hurt XD
The pre-phone sex bit was very sexy and (as always) well written.
#2: DRAMMMMA I love it, I can't lie. I love angsty, dramatic twists that mess with everything. And it's so different for me to be writing... I'm having a lot of fun with it :)
#3: Finn/Maritza is definitely worth shipping! I was surprised at how cute they started being.
#4: heh Thanks! I didn't want to bombard us all with sexy-time scenes, so I decided to end it there with the "break for commercial"... seemed more powerful there than if I'd written heavy breathing and what-not ;)
Ok, Ben is a bitch! I like the idea of Finn and Maritza. I'm glad he didn't let her get away this time and... first headaches and then throwing up?? I've been there before ::side eye::
This made my monday! I have been wondering for like the last 5 days where this was going to go and now I see :D
Finn/Maritza turned out a lot cuter than I originally thought. We'll have to see where it goes...
I'm assuming you mean Colton when you say "I'm glad he didn't let her get away this time"? If so, then yes, it would appear that he seems to be learning from past mistakes, eh? :)
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I don't think Finn sent the e-mail but the poor dude is conflicted. Hopefully Maritza could help him work things out. I do think they'd be cute together but doesn't she have a boyfriend? Hrmmmmmmmmmm.....
Claire and Colton --- just a little while longer you two! I'm hoping they can keep themselves safe just until Claire graduates. Damn drama!
I totally understand the self esteem issues. For what it's worth, I think you're a wonderful writer! It's always a pleasure reading your chapters. :)
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She DID have a boyfriend. You're very right!! (Wow, good job!) But that was several months ago, and we are to assume that it did not pan out as planned. ;)
Damn drama ruins EVERYTHING doesn't it??
... ::blushes:: thank you!! I am so pleased someone like you even -reads- my stuff, let alone actually -likes- it... :)
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Well, I'm glad that Maritza may no longer have a boyfriend. I think she can help Finn a lot, but I wouldn't want him to get caught in another triangle again. :)
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That damn Ben and his meddling. Finn would never do anything so vindictive to someone he cared about, as Claire thought and as Maritza pointed out. Fortunately, if Claire ends up confronting Finn about this, then it should be fairly obvious to her that he didn't do it, right? Right? *is hopeful*
In any case, I'm not too worried about these two in the long run. Claire doesn't have much longer to go, and then they can be together. If only Ben didn't have to make this last stretch so difficult for them... :(
Great work, as always. Well worth the wait :)
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LMAO Van... yeah that about describes the situation, doesn't it??
Ben is, as everyone is affectionately calling him, a Douche... and he is most definitely meddling his skinny little butt off. Hopefully we will find out the reason semi-soonish.
Thanks Van!!! ^__^
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Ben is eeeevil. And I feel bad for Finn, because Claire and Colton will blame him... I ship C/C so much, but now I think Finn deserves to be happy, since he was hurt XD
The pre-phone sex bit was very sexy and (as always) well written.
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#2: DRAMMMMA I love it, I can't lie. I love angsty, dramatic twists that mess with everything. And it's so different for me to be writing... I'm having a lot of fun with it :)
#3: Finn/Maritza is definitely worth shipping! I was surprised at how cute they started being.
#4: heh Thanks! I didn't want to bombard us all with sexy-time scenes, so I decided to end it there with the "break for commercial"... seemed more powerful there than if I'd written heavy breathing and what-not ;)
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I like the idea of Finn and Maritza.
I'm glad he didn't let her get away this time and...
first headaches and then throwing up?? I've been there before ::side eye::
This made my monday! I have been wondering for like the last 5 days where this was going to go and now I see :D
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Finn/Maritza turned out a lot cuter than I originally thought. We'll have to see where it goes...
I'm assuming you mean Colton when you say "I'm glad he didn't let her get away this time"? If so, then yes, it would appear that he seems to be learning from past mistakes, eh? :)
I'm glad I could make your Monday!! :D
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She could have the flu? uh huh
I feel like a cat on catnip when it comes to this story!
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