FANFICTION: WE COULD STEAL TIME

[the_idiotgirl]

Title: We Could Steal Time
Summary: Jacob, Bella, and the years keep slipping past.
Author’s Note: Unbeta-ed. Can't sleep.
Disclaimer: I own nothing.

Comments

[haydn_hottie]

OMG! TBQH, I have never ever cried over a J/B fic before...until now.

I think my heart's about to explode from the beauty of your story. Everything is just so wonderfully written. I love how you were able to capture the magic and wonders of having a normal marriage life...all of it.

This is my fave part. ♥ it to the highest degree!!

“I’m old.”
Jacob chuckles, dips his head so that their foreheads touch. “So am I.”

Great work BB! Hope to read moar from you! <3333333

[the_idiotgirl]

I made you cry? Oh, goodness. I should probably feel sorry, but I’m a little proud of finally getting you to shed a tear. Is that wrong of me?

And thank you for the lovely review.

[the_idiotgirl]

Yeah, I’ve never seen Jacob and Bella’s relationship going smoothly. I partly based their relationship on my mom and her boyfriend’s relationship. They were together for a few years when I was younger, then broke up for seven years, and have now been back together for three years. And they argue about dishes and mowing the lawn to the point where they can’t even stand to be in the same room as each other, but at the end of the day they sleep in the same bed. Except when he drinks, which means he has to sleep on the couch because my mom says he becomes, and I quote, “annoying.”

And your brother’s an oops baby? So am! But the kind that was born too early, not late. My mom was sixteen when she had me. Anyway, thanks for the review!

[unalike]

*tear*

that was lovely

[the_idiotgirl]

Thanks.

[the_angry_pixie]

this was lovely. a wonderful summary of what could have been. I loved it. :)

[the_idiotgirl]

Aw, shucks. Thanks.

[mrsjoshjack]

Nnngh. So great.

It was so great that I forgot she married the vampire and had a demon baby.

I want yours more :(

[the_idiotgirl]

Thank you. I’m glad I could make you forget the steaming cesspool that is BD.