Argument Challenge Fic

[pili204]

Author: pili204
Title: Broken Dishes
Rating: PG
Pairing: Ron/Hermione
Word Count: 1537
Summary: Hermione goes a bit irrational over some broken teapot.

Comments

[willow_wand]

I loved this. I think the uncertainty of starting a new life together would cause Hermione to be a little protective. It's like she's worried when the cracks will start to show in their own relationship. I think Ron's gentle approach to calm her down was very sweet. And it shows a lot of maturity. Nice job! :)

[spidergirl30]

I loved this moment of them to pieces, Pili.

I think Hermione would feel a few uncertainties about a life together with Ron as they got used to each other bad and good habits, the most important thing to a couple for handling for get a happy lifetime together. Fact that you wrote in the best way and very ic, as a worried Hermione became a very protective Hermione. ;)

Ron's way to calm Hermione down was very sweet and very mature, as Ron just would be in that time of their lives. :)

Wonderful job!
Thanks for participate.
:)

[drcjsnider]

Oh... good thing she learns early that nothing ever is perfect and trying to hold someone to that standard is impossible and frustrating...

nice to see Ron being the sensible one

[missgranger2]

Oh Pili you write such wonderful stories. This was perfect. I loved the playful banter. I also loved how clueless our boy was about what our girl was irritated over. *laughs* This is genuine Ron and Hermione and you write them so darn well!

Loved it!!!

XXX,
T

[julieweasely]

lovely story. I like how hermione compare the broken dish to her relantionship with ron and the way he try to fix things with Hermione