Drabble: Synesthetic (Heroes; Adam)

Nov 23, 2007 12:45

Watching and re-watching David Anders' hand-acting in "Cautionary Tales." Spoilers for 2.09.

Adam Monroe, Kaito Nakamura. PG. On the roof.

One moment is eternity;
eternity is now.
When you see through this one instant,
you see through the one who sees.

- Wu-Men (1183-1260)

Synesthetic )

my fic, fic-heroes, adam monroe

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midnightdream__ November 23 2007, 02:36:14 UTC
I've been reading a lot of your drabbles, and you have just continuously stunned me into silence. I can't even put into words how amazing your writing is, it has such power. You have a way with describing... brilliant.

You see Adam truly the way I do, as well. Fantastic job!

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the_grynne November 23 2007, 05:16:10 UTC
Hee! Thank you so much! Adam/Kensei is such an amazing character - I'm glad you're enjoying the drabbles.

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ghostrunner7 November 23 2007, 03:17:38 UTC
"the ghostly scent of gunpowder" is an excellent line. I may try to slip that into everyday conversation.

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the_grynne November 23 2007, 05:17:49 UTC
I get strong synesthesia from gunpowder as well (to the sound of fireworks or Chinese firecrackers), so the idea came from that. :)

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the_grynne November 23 2007, 10:16:22 UTC
The first thing I thought when I watched that scene where he passes his hand slowly over that wall - it was snakelike, so languid but full of controlled tension. That must be how he approaches the world all the time.

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force_oblique November 24 2007, 08:06:22 UTC
Wow!!!
So powerful!!!!
Loved this part:
But in time, as flesh becomes vapour and teeth explode into fragments in your mouth, you accept this moment will happen again, will happen again - one moment spread across eternity -

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the_grynne November 24 2007, 12:11:20 UTC
Thank you so much!

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selenak November 26 2007, 06:58:40 UTC
the_grynne November 26 2007, 20:49:02 UTC
*giggles* Awesome...

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