Fic: April (Chapter 12)
So school has been a little hectic, but anyway <3
This is definitely my longest chapter yet, and hope it goes over as well as the others.
Title: April
Author: Brainzz_Insanee
Pairing: David/Kelly(OC), David/Kimberly, eventual David/Michael
Status: 12/14
Word Count: 7053
Rating: R
Summary: David Cook has reached the feat everyone wants to achieve: He’s ( Read more... )
This is definitely my longest chapter yet, and hope it goes over as well as the others.
Title: April
Author: Brainzz_Insanee
Pairing: David/Kelly(OC), David/Kimberly, eventual David/Michael
Status: 12/14
Word Count: 7053
Rating: R
Summary: David Cook has reached the feat everyone wants to achieve: He’s ( Read more... )
I will try my best to pick out some of the parts that I just adored! (Oh and the LJ cut is win! As always). Some I won’t say anything on because it’s all so very epic!
““What are you doing?”/ Will you just hold still?”/ He sees it in slow motion, Michael’s mouth approaching his own. It’s not something he ever thought to see because it’s far from his views on what is and not possible/.He immerses himself in this intoxication; indulging in the desired apple in the garden, pushing against that solid figure until there’s no room for anything to fit between.”- That whole scene is so wonderful. I love the imagery. To finally see this after talking about it and planning it, it’s just so great!! You’re so great!!
“He wants one moment with no hesitation or thinking… he searches for it because using his brain has done enough damage to his psyche”-Aww…poor David.
“The loss happens far sooner than he expects, eyes clenching as a small bead of liquid makes its way straight down his face from the edge of his eye. He doesn’t even feel it escape his eye but his skin jumps from warmth on his cheek, lips kissing the tear away as if it had never made its journey.”-The image of Michael kissing the tear away, it’s so wonderful….
“Dave works his fingers into the mess of brown curls, bringing them to the
top of the Australian’s head and pressing down on Michael’s head so that the older bows it forward by David’s chin. Leaning forward, he kisses the man’s forehead.” -Lovely, just, lovely.
““Never once could I stop wanting… needing… loving you.”-I love this line!!
“Michael releases a sigh as well, sinking to the floor with Dave holding onto him. David’s about to speak but stops himself upon hearing a chuckle from the Aussie. This makes him smile as well, and from afar, they’re close enough to each other as they can manage. The older of the two sits with his back to the porch post, legs open and knees up while David lays in between them. His left hand holds Michael’s right while his other hand strokes the rich brown, curly hair. Dave closes his eyes in contentment, the Aussie’s other hand on the small of his back and rubbing light circles there.”-That image is heaven. *happy sigh*
“The other man reaches to run fingers through Dave’s hair, smiling in the process when the tips of them trail down the side of the face and down the neck. Michael opens his mouth to speak, but stops and smiles mysteriously instead./David raises a brow, “What?” /“Nothing, just-- I love you too.””-SQUEE!! Michael loves David, Michael loves David. It’s so great just to read that.
““You’re so obnoxious.”/Michael scoffs at him, “And you’re a sweetie pie too. Thanks mate.”-HAHAHA…
“David grins, “I’m pretty sure your knee hit mine first.”/“You’re delusional mate.””-Oh boys….hehehe
““I can kiss you… whenever I want…” Dave murmurs under his breath, more so talking to himself than the Aussie./The said many calls his name, “Within reason… yes. This time is a good one for kissing.”“You’re not hinting at all…”/Michael smirks, “Not at all…” He trails sarcastically. “Kiss me already, would you?””-Michael’s very demanding isn’t he? Love it!!
“Once you have something, the appeal weakens and all you want is the next forbidden fruit but there are the rare times when the struggle for your desire was worth every second of agony.”-EPIC
The scene of David climbing on top of Michael and them kissing is SO HOT!! I can’t get enough of it! The imagery is so hot and so damn good!!
Reply
It is insane, isn't it? We talked about this stuff several chapters ago and to finally be able to write this... it's basically awesome!
"image of heaven" YAYYYYY xDDD
I really wanted that imagery to get across as so peaceful and etc... a moment of tranquility between them ♥
Thank you!!!! ♥
Reply
Leave a comment