HHF ENTRY: Into the Haze, Part 2

[ciwey]

HORRIFYING HALLOWEEN FIC ENTRY
Title: Into the Haze
Author: ciwey
Rating: NC-17 for excessive swearing and depiction of violence
Summary: A night at the Gamma Rho Fraternity House turns out to be hell.
Disclaimer: This never happened.
Author’s Notes: Angsty College!Mavid. Based on the Cold Case episode "The Promise". Comments and constructive

Comments

[brainzz_insanee]

More WOW. I really enjoyed Stacey's turmoil and Michael's search for David... this is so filled with angst, that it's dripping off each word. The insanity makes me crazy addicted and I'm excited to read the next part!

Convulsive waves of darkness shot through his vision as everything went slightly dimmed, the intense pain in his head searing away all else that he knew. Disorientated from the pain in his skull and the mild concussion his brain had sustained, Michael only managed to totter on his two feet for a second or two before toppling over and crashing backwards into a wall.
--- *hugs Michael* OMG I NEED TO KILL HUNTER

Wrenching free the box of matches from her purse with what might have been worshipful glee, the girl could only give thanks to whatever deities existed above. If such deities did in fact exist, they probably would have informed her not to do whatever she was planning on, or at least have smited her with some intense level of divine intervention if she persisted. Instead she pulled free a single match from the box, and with trembling fingers she struck the match.
--- Love the "divine intervention" and her lighting the match, it's a perfectly realistic thing for her to do!