fic: April (Chapter 6)

Aug 29, 2008 23:38

Finally, here's the next chapter of April!

Thanks for waiting so long readers! (Love you guys so much)

Title: April   
Author: Brainzz_Insanee
Pairing: David/Kelly(OC), David/Kimberly, eventual David/Michael
Status: 6/?
Word Count: 5424
Rating: PG-13
Summary: David Cook has reached the feat everyone wants to achieve: He’s got a great girlfriend, a ( Read more... )

fanfic: pg-13

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micheleeeex August 30 2008, 04:44:09 UTC
I love this story!!!

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brainzz_insanee August 30 2008, 16:13:25 UTC
Hehe, thank you!

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apathyxurgency August 30 2008, 06:41:51 UTC
OH MY GOD.
I'm not even kidding, I'm all choked up and my eyes are all glazed over.

“Daddy…” The young girl murmurs, launching herself suddenly into his arms. David laughs richly, arms coming around her completely and resting his head against hers. She joins in, giggling into his neck. Her soft hair tickles his cheek and her fingers tug at his hair. She actually stays in his embrace, she doesn’t move except snuggle further into him. Unintentionally though, he releases a small and strangled sob against her. She moves away from him with confused eyes when one of his tears touches her fair skin ( ... )

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brainzz_insanee August 30 2008, 16:19:43 UTC
Wow...
You've seriously got me all teared up right now from your words!
I'm sorry I made you cry *hugs you tightly*

My main goal for the chapter was to focus on April and David's relationship, because for other chapters, I hadn't done that yet.

I'm so touched... that you were able to vividly imagine scenes and don't even get me started on you considering this one of your favorite stories. That's the biggest compliment ever...and I can't thank you enough/properly for it but this will have to do... THANK YOU SOOOOOO SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!

Once again, thanks... this review made my day.
♥ you!

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apathyxurgency August 30 2008, 16:35:46 UTC
Awww *hugs you*<3

XD It's quite alright!<3

Well I'm glad you did so. It was nice to see them interact with one another.

Awww you're so welcome, love!
XD ♥ you deserve it. You're doing a great job!

I ♥ you tooo!

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brainzz_insanee August 30 2008, 16:50:18 UTC
*continues to hug you*

I'm so glad it went over all right =] I didn't want people to read this and wonder when the interactions between April and David were going to end.

Thanks ♥ ♥

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cherrymaryberry August 30 2008, 17:19:00 UTC
*BOOM*

My heart just went BOOM from all the cutness!!!!!!!

This has to be my favorite chapter so far!!!!!! It's just sooo cute!!!!! I want to cuddle April!!

I nearly died of laughter at the part where Michael says to Beth what if he doesn't wear underwear. The look on David's face. HAHAHAHAHA

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ you

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brainzz_insanee August 30 2008, 17:35:29 UTC
Awwwwwww *hugs*

*repairs your boomed/broken heart*
Your favorite chapter????
-is ded-

Thank you THANK YOU =D
Oh Michael... so funny XD

♥♥♥♥ you more!

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cherazz September 2 2008, 05:09:37 UTC
SQUEE!!! Everything about this was adorable! Loved it so much ( ... )

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brainzz_insanee September 2 2008, 05:43:42 UTC
YAYYYYYY!!!!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥

*squishes you crazily* Thanks soooooooooo much!
Haha! Oh Beth... what horrible timing =P
(it's okay for cursing the arrival for her... I think XD)

Lmao. The commando line had to be done!! Michael is so the one to do that! It's cheesy but it's good cheesy because come on, who doesn't mind the image of nothing under Michael's pants except skin and other things X'DDDDDD

Corona and yeah, I was tuning to Shaun for that 'no probs' line. I knew you'd enjoy!!

Again, thank you!!!! Reviews are sunshine! :)
And I'm sooo happy that everyone's responding well to April.
LOVEEEEE YOUUUUU!!!!

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cherazz September 8 2008, 00:52:25 UTC
Haha, good, I'm glad I'm partially excused for cursing her arrival time. An hour or two later would've been perfect ;)

Michael totally goes commando all the time. Mentioning that he did it once or twice on Idol is only a cover-up for the truth xD Not that I'd know, but once you do it once, why not keep doing it? *smirks*

Haha, oh Shaun...my original favorite Aussie xD

Totally agree with reviews = sunshine. May I add that they equal love as well? 0=)

*big hugs*♥

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