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Oct 28, 2005 04:18

Title: Jealousy
Author: SilentAuror
Genre/Rating: Angsty romance; NC-17
Length: 3,403 words
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters.
Cheque #40: Harry to Draco: I promise to get jealous.

Also read it at Skyehawke, The Hex Files, or my journal.

( Jealousy )

second wave

Comments 20

wook77 October 28 2005, 15:56:29 UTC

oh this was perfect. Those naughty boys in the hallway... how come that never happens at the parties I go to?

Actually, I think you do their emotions quite well, as well as their reactions. You can feel the rage pouring off the boys and then the love. It was a really abrupt transition that worked realistically. (as in, been there, done that kind of realization).

As always, much love to you!

silentauror October 28 2005, 18:37:59 UTC

Heh - you need to come to the parties I go to, love. :) Wouldn't that be fun, actually? Let's try and arrange that. :)

Thank you so much! I'm so glad that came off as realistic. I've also been in that sort of situation/solution (queen of the dysfunctional relationship!). A stressful way of dealing with things, perhaps. ;)

Thanks, honey! Right back at you! ♥

beo_slytherin October 28 2005, 17:26:24 UTC

ummm...*drools*

another great ficcy! I love to read jealousy fics, and this one didn't dissapoint. ^^

the sex scene was also great. *drools* Kudos to you! *hugs*

silentauror October 28 2005, 18:39:42 UTC

Thank you so much! :) I have a weakness for jealousy fics, myself! I'm glad it lived up to your hopes. :) Thanks for reading it! *hugs back*

dreamyraynbo October 28 2005, 21:30:00 UTC

This was beautifully done. One of the most realistic H/D pieces I've read. Not that I don't love the fluffy stuff, but if they did get together, I can imagine it being like this. Petulant little Draco, gotta love him :P

silentauror October 29 2005, 01:45:23 UTC

Thank you so much! This is terribly pleasing to me, that it came across as realistic. :) I do love petulant!Draco, though, I have to admit! Thanks for reading this! ♥

fiona_fawkes October 29 2005, 01:14:42 UTC

Now THAT was a realistic version of what I think a relationship between Harry and Draco would be like. Wonderfully written.

silentauror October 29 2005, 01:45:54 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad it seemed realistic to you. :) Thanks for reading!

And I love your icon!

ripples_and_i October 29 2005, 09:48:03 UTC

That was emotionally stunning, and had a really good feel the whole way through: the characterisation was, in my humble opinion, very very good.
Well done!
Axx

silentauror October 29 2005, 22:28:05 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so pleased that the emotions came through, and your comment about the characterization totally just made my day. Thank you! :)