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FIC: ST RPS -- Jordan Has Two Daddies (1/2)

Jun 13, 2011 15:39

Title: Jordan Has Two Daddies (1/2)
Author: the_deep_magic
Pairing: Pinto
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 15,900
Warnings: kid!fic, domesticity
Disclaimer: manifestly untrue
Summary: When Chris gets an unexpected new family member, he calls Zach for help.
A/N: written for the lovely and generous darlapr0duction, who won me for the Queensland auction. Thanks for your patience, bb! ( Read more... )

rps, pinto, fic

Comments 9

1lostone June 13 2011, 19:46:22 UTC

I HAVE NO WORDS FOR.. AHHH!!! KIDFIC!!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG.

*runs off to actually read story*

shutterbitch June 13 2011, 20:14:56 UTC

I haven't finished this yet, but I wanted you to know you have me DYING OVER HERE. Longer, more coherent comment later, when I can give this its proper due, but OMFG!

I snorted. My coworkers think I'm insane. SERIOUSLY, I LOVE YOU ALREADY FOR WRITING THIS AND I'M NOT EVEN PAST THE DUCT TAPE DIAPER!

marlee813 June 13 2011, 20:17:29 UTC

oh my god this is soooo goooooood. yay kid!fic squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

eefreeboo June 13 2011, 20:34:36 UTC

OMFG IT'S LIKE ALL MY PINTOMASSES COME AT ONCE!! HAVE YOU BEEN INSIDE MY HEAD WITHOUT ME KNOWING?! This is glorious and I will need a new F5 button by the time you've posted the rest!!!! (feel free to make it a series if you feel the incination :D :D :D)

Sorry, I'll stop flailing now <3<3<3<3

littleboycalico June 13 2011, 21:43:11 UTC

I can't express my joy when I saw the summary of this fic. I love Pinto kid!fic and this was just the cutest and most fun read ever.

“That is adorable,” Chris gushed. “I want that one.”

“Those are so the older siblings don’t feel left out,” Zach explained, gazing evenly at Chris, who had just found a miniature Babies R Us shopping cart. “Unless you want to carry Jordan around, I suggest you get a Big People cart so we can set her in it.”

I love your Chris. It kills me every time he does something that a 5-year old would do. And of course Zach has to step in and be the voice of reason.

“I think that’s the first time I’ve heard you call yourself her dad.”

Chris beamed, a light flush spreading across his cheeks. “Yeah?”

“Yeah.”

TOO MUCH CUTE. I CAN'T.

(edited cause italics outsmarted me)