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FIC: Star Trek RPS - Our Thing (2/2)

Jan 24, 2010 02:03

Title: Our Thing (2/2)
Author: the_deep_magic
Pairing: Pinto
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 10,464
Warnings/Promises: semi-public bj, frotting, mirrors, bits o’ angst, mutual masturbation
Disclaimer: I do not know these gentlemen, but it pleases me to tell you lies about them.
Summary: In which Chris is unduly tense and Zach is willing to help…
A/N: See part one

( Chris had his pride. Not much of it, but he did. )

rps, pinto, star trek, fic

Comments 131

perdiccas January 24 2010, 08:06:57 UTC

Awwww! Perfect conclusion.

I loved this: “I can’t- I wish I could say I won’t be your experiment,” Zach said, his voice strained. “But if you ask me, I won’t say no. You need to know that if this doesn’t work out, if we try and you decide you can’t do this, I won’t be able to just shrug that off. So just… think first. Please.”

I'm a total sucker for vulnerable guys so this was just oh so very perfect. Also, much appreciation for all the coming in the pants -- I love it when my weirder kinks are unexpectedly catered to. ;)

Really great fic. Instant mem. ♥

the_deep_magic January 25 2010, 04:24:45 UTC

Also, much appreciation for all the coming in the pants

After having written this several times, I have come to the conclusion that I, too, might have a little bit of a thing for this. Thanks for reading!

withthepilot January 24 2010, 08:13:24 UTC

I'm torn between awwwwww or nnnnngh as a reaction to this beauty. Maybe I could go with a mix of both?

Loved it, babe! Chris is so obtuse sometimes, god love him. Also, "Diet Chris" totally made me snort with laughter.

the_deep_magic January 25 2010, 04:29:15 UTC

Also, "Diet Chris" totally made me snort with laughter.

Good! That was one of those things where I'm all "This is supposed to be a Serious Moment -- should I put a joke here?" So glad you liked it!

__dittany January 24 2010, 08:26:33 UTC

THIS WAS OUTRAGEOUSLY HOT.

AND BANANAGRAMS IS THE SHIT.

BEYOND THAT MY BRAIN... OK YEAH.

the_deep_magic January 25 2010, 04:30:02 UTC

Yay Bananagrams! They're always playing Scrabble in fics, and while I do love the Scrabble, I thought I'd mix it up a bit. Thanks for commenting!

dazi_li January 24 2010, 08:27:04 UTC

XD Poor Anton, not used to grand displays of boylove over brunch. Exactly how it needed to end, dude, spectacular stuff.

...now on to the sequels where Zach slowly eases Chris into the more hardcore stuff. ;)

adoorhasopened January 24 2010, 21:35:24 UTC

Oh god, I second this!

the_deep_magic January 25 2010, 04:31:25 UTC

Thank you! I don't have a sequel planned, but I'll keep it in mind.

tinocka January 24 2010, 08:27:26 UTC

Oh God, this was just brilliant. It had me grinning since the beginning till the end. And at times I felt oh God so sorry for Zach and also for Chris (especially when Zach freaked out) and I loved the end :D

the_deep_magic January 25 2010, 04:32:19 UTC

Yeah, they were both a bit oblivious. Glad you liked it!