Kirk/McCoy fic: The Sum of Us

Jun 19, 2009 01:11

I am totally blaming this on greenabsinthe and andrealyn. Mostly the last part. THEY KNOW WHAT THEY DID.

It was supposed to be drabbles. It is not drabbles. There's angst, there's sap (for reals), there's not really any smut because good god I only have so much smut in me okay! Fuck it, I will just do a header.

Title: The Sum of Us ( Read more... )

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feanna June 19 2009, 06:29:09 UTC
I love Joanna, she should be in more fic! And Bones dropping that line about Jim's stepfather right in there without warning totally got me.

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the_dala June 20 2009, 13:56:54 UTC
Thanks! :)

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tiggothy June 19 2009, 08:49:29 UTC
<3
I love you and I love your fic. But you knew that already :-)
Thank you for a fabulous start to my day (and also for how much info you put into this tale - v. helpful for me ;-)

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the_dala June 20 2009, 13:58:21 UTC
I'll be thrilled if you get some use out of it! And thanks :)

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juniper200 June 19 2009, 08:52:33 UTC
Who is the best? Dala is the best!

The line about the peanut gallery is my favorite. So Bones-ey.

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the_dala June 20 2009, 13:58:41 UTC
::grins:: Thanks!

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ceria_taliesin June 19 2009, 10:24:44 UTC
Ditto what Junie says!

Pike, Winona and Jo in the same story? I'm full of squee over here.

The peanut gallery line is wonderful, but I really like McCoy confronting Winona, then still telling her to call Jim more often.

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the_dala June 20 2009, 13:59:42 UTC
Thank you! :) Yeah, I've had that first line of the McCoy-Winona confrontation in my head for awhile now.

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seren_ccd June 19 2009, 11:21:05 UTC
Love, love, love this! The different POV's work so well here. Joanna is fantastic and is just a miniature Bones in the making. The Chekov section was beautiful. Such a good story!

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the_dala June 20 2009, 14:00:02 UTC
Thank you! :)

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