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19 - The Heartbreak

Sep 09, 2009 11:01

Title: The Heartbreak
Characters: Russia/America.
Rating: PG-13.
Summary: 1933 - The time comes to recognize the Soviet Union, and nothing is like it was.

TCE is co-written by wizzard890 and pyrrhiccomedy.

( America had so much nervous energy that he'd assembled and taken apart three consecutive towers... )

from the ministry of plenty

Comments 5

hakujou_weiss March 15 2010, 10:41:36 UTC

My god...this chapter broke my heart in every way imaginable...I'm clenching at my chest because it actually HURTS. Fantastic writing there to do that to me D:

nostalgic5947 June 8 2010, 03:33:13 UTC

“a sort of hollow orange sound”
I have never seen sound described as orange before. I actually had to stop and think about what you meant. I am assuming something along the lines of obnoxious? Since the color is often seen as such.
Either way, kudos for originality? XD

OMG Russia! D= How could you be so MEAN!?!?!? Dx
-huggles America- It’s ok, I still love you <3
Something tells me this hurts Russia too though.
Wonderfully written as always. I felt like crying too.

pyro_turk July 6 2011, 06:07:35 UTC

I cried, a lot. I think it may take me a while to stop.

Amazing

ext_822912 March 27 2012, 22:05:24 UTC

like america would say 'fucking amazing'!

ext_1791907 May 8 2013, 02:04:10 UTC

I. *punch* FREAKING. *punch* HATE. *punch* YOU. *punch* SO. *punch* MUCH! *withdraws bloody hands from keyboard*

(okay no not really this is the freaking best story i've ever read you are amazing i love you so much)

But I still hate you. I literally burst into tears; my mother is extremely concerned for my welfare. I can't explain any of this to her, either.

WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME!! RUSSIA, WHY DO YOU DO THIS????

Please tell me this is as bad as it gets. My heart can't take anymore sadstuck feels. ;_;

(oh god it's going to get worse isn't it)