52 - My Death Will Have Your Eyes [Pt 3]

Apr 29, 2010 16:24

Title: My Death Will Have Your Eyes [Pt 3]
Characters: Russia/America.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: 1962 - Russia attempts to renegotiate the terms of his deal, and America finally draws a line in the sand.

TCE is co-written by wizzard890 and pyrrhiccomedy.

America had been quivering inside his clothes ever since he got up that morning. )

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fallenxembers17 April 29 2010, 23:35:39 UTC
*whimpers*

oh boys.

I cannot post anything more coherent than that. Just, omg. I was truly whimpering out loud while I was reading this. Boys, whyyyyyyyyy. ;_____;

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wizzard890 April 29 2010, 23:57:15 UTC
/soothe!

This had to happen, awful as it is. An ultimatum is, in the end, exactly what the two of them need.

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idiotalchemist April 29 2010, 23:42:17 UTC
One step forwards, two steps back. Geez, do these two need marriage counseling or what?

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wizzard890 April 29 2010, 23:58:34 UTC
I get the feeling that now that America's made them both put their cards down on the table, this may be the last time we truly see this kind of "minor success, HUGE FUCKING FAILURE" disfunction.

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idiotalchemist April 30 2010, 01:36:54 UTC
We can only hope those two will finally be able to balance their relationships as Ivan-and-Alfred and Russia-and-USA.

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hellzabeth April 29 2010, 23:43:25 UTC
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coherency has left the building.

Holy shit that was so intense! Even though I know what's going to happen I just-- aaaaaarrrgh! You stupid, stupid boys, why are you so stubborn!?

Keep going, keep going, I'll die without it!

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wizzard890 April 30 2010, 00:00:01 UTC
Even though I know what's going to happen I just-- aaaaaarrrgh!

We are both kind of thrilled that we can still drag you guys to the edge of your seats, even when a lot of the twists are just a Google search away. XD

Keep going, keep going, I'll die without it!

It's coming, man! Hang in there!

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saemi_mitsuwa April 29 2010, 23:54:33 UTC
Oh boy, talk about your intense moments >_> The air felt so thick I could cut it with a knife!

But seriously I was on the edge of my seat the entire time, clicking the scroll ball on my mouse going "oh shit" Lol. And if I may, hopefully this doesn't come out badly, but it actually kinda felt... nice(?)... to see America defending his stance on something so strongly. Half the time he seems hesitant or unsure or has this fake air of confidence, but this felt raw and real.

Awesome job guys, I can't wait for the next installment! :D

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wizzard890 April 30 2010, 00:11:55 UTC
And if I may, hopefully this doesn't come out badly, but it actually kinda felt... nice(?)... to see America defending his stance on something so strongly.

No, I totally understand. In the past, America has tempered some of his responses with Russia (just as anyone might make allowances for someone they love), but here it's just...too much. In America's eyes, this is Russia saying what he's has been waiting for decades to hear, and then backpedaling. There's no way he's excusing something like that.

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pyrrhiccomedy April 30 2010, 00:21:24 UTC
(just as anyone might make allowances for someone they love)

I also think America just--isn't very confident when it comes to Russia. (Why else would he need FIVE THOUSAND MISSILES to back him up, kinda overcompensating there kiddo a little bit.) Russia's always kept him off-balance and on his toes, sometimes intentionally, sometimes unintentionally, and America's hesitated to get in his face in the past because Russia's got a knack for knocking his feet out from under him.

Also, America is 18 and is dumb around the boy he likes. It's a thing. We've all been there.

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mieva_r April 29 2010, 23:56:12 UTC
Gods damn it, you two! You're both so- so- dysfunctional! >< I can't wait to see the conclusion~

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wizzard890 April 30 2010, 00:12:21 UTC
Soon, my dear, very soon! Stay strong!

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