Never a Bride-18/?

[the_bluesuede]

Author: BlueSuede
Title:  Never a Bride
Rating:  NC17
Genre: Romance/Humor
Pairings/Characters: primarily Chloe/Oliver
Summary:  When a newspaper prints a false engagement announcement for Oliver Queen and Chloe Sullivan, and all their friends are thrilled, Chloe and Oliver decide to stage a fake engagement and breakup to prove to their friends how

Comments

[scout09]

I've been looking forward to this update all week and it's finally here! Eeeeeeee! Happy to say you did not disappoint - this was absolutely amazing.

I love how you've maintained characterization even post-intimacy, because that is my favorite aspect of this story. Sometimes you see characters soften towards each other as they grow closer and that can at times push past mere character growth into losing pieces of what made them appealing in the first place. Their mildly argumentative banter during the sex scene was fantastic and so them.

He couldn't get her to come out from under the sheet, so with a sigh he dove underneath it to look at her. I thought him burrowing under the blanket with her was so adorable.

I love that they drove each other to distraction, and they now can't function as normal human beings without being together. That whole ending scene with them watching tv and sharing ice cream was perfect and seriously hot. Oliver would never know how she'd planned to finish that sentence. He was too busy kissing her and carrying her off the couch to the bedroom. - Heeeeeeee. God I love this story so much. I can't thank you enough for putting time into it and sharing it with us! :D