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Contact--1/1

Jan 30, 2011 17:04

Author: BlueSuede
Title: Contact
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance/Angst
Pairings: Chloe/Oliver
Summary: a one-shot glimpse into loneliness
Warning: somewhat AU (Chloe and Oliver aren't together)

Author's Note: I'm still battling writer's block among other things, and once again, I seized an idea when it presented itself; I hope it's not terribly ( Read more... )

smallville, author's note, oneshot, fanfiction, pair: chlollie

Comments 12

gabrielladusult January 30 2011, 17:23:29 UTC

You have so many beautiful images in this, I can't even pick out my favorites. I really understand this feeling. As an introvert, I don't mind lack of contact ordinarily, but with my husband gone for the past 6 months, I find myself begging hugs and tickles and cuddles off my children.

And you're beautiful -- even blurry.

ext_269779 January 30 2011, 17:40:41 UTC

Even with writers block you seem to be able to get right down to the feelings that you are trying to portray. Your work has made me laugh and cry and everything in between. The story is amazing and thank you for sharing it. You are very beautiful.

sxymami0909 January 30 2011, 17:41:56 UTC

This was so beautifully written! The imagery in this were absolutely amazing. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

you82it January 30 2011, 17:46:00 UTC

Amazing!!! really intense!!!

ihearttvsnark January 30 2011, 18:41:27 UTC

Wow. That was amazing. I think you captured the lonlieness both of them felt perfectly. I love how they were both opening up to the idea of being together, but neither could quite admit it to themselves, let alone imagine saying it to each other. The last scene was absolutely perfect. I could feel every emotion through this entire piece. Wonderful job.