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Gift for dysonrules

Jun 07, 2008 19:45

Author: tuawahine
Recipient: dysonrules
Title: Stealth & Tracking
Pairing: Albus/Scorpius
Summary: During an Auror training course, Scorpius realises that maybe he wants to be more than friends with Al Potter.
Rating: R
Warnings: slash (Scorpius wouldn't call it sex, exactly, but Al says he's wrong)
Word Count: 10,830
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein ( Read more... )

fest: 2008 spring exchange, *fic, words: 10k+, rating: r

Comments 76

ravenqueen55 June 7 2008, 17:38:18 UTC

Oh that was fantastic! And thoroughly hot, I might add. I do so love these boys!!!

tuawahine August 18 2008, 20:17:50 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad I got the hotness across. :)

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tuawahine August 18 2008, 20:18:05 UTC

Thank you!
Sounds like you're mirroring Scorpius' expression in the end there...

hepson June 7 2008, 18:45:14 UTC

: D Ok, I loved Scorpius' reluctance and the bit at the beginning when he syas that he doesn't- I will just quote it -__-

You know perfectly well I don't drink hard liquor, and you still showed me up for the entertainment value. I hope it was a good laugh."

His voice was bitter, but low, not wanting any of the other trainees to know how angry he was over something they probably just considered a joke between friends.

Al's teasing grin vanished. He stared hard at Scorpius for a few seconds, then shook his head in disbelief.

That was lovely because it seemed so IC for me.

I thought Scorpius' fears about a fling were nicely genuine and the truth and dare game made me giggle. : ]

tuawahine August 18 2008, 20:18:27 UTC

Yeah, my Scorpius is pretty insecure about certain things.

I'm glad you liked the Truth and Dare. It is probably one of the clichés in fanfiction, but that's just because it is so much fun to read and write. :)

maraudersaffair June 7 2008, 19:07:14 UTC

That was very enjoyable -- loved Albus' character in this one and the different challenges that they had to do. :D

tuawahine August 18 2008, 20:18:39 UTC

Thank you!
I had a lot of fun thinking up the various training scenarios. :P

abusing_sarcasm June 7 2008, 20:48:06 UTC

Loved this super much!!!! Wonderful plot and just beautiful characterization... Thoroughly enjoyable from start to finish!

Brava!

tuawahine August 18 2008, 20:18:50 UTC

*bows*

Thank you!

Also, thanks again for the beta. *hands you flowers and hugs you*