Winter Shorts 2008 Round Two: Fic - Make Love, Not War - PG-13

Dec 11, 2008 21:30

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Title: Make Love, Not War
Name: tomatoe18
Prompt: #133 - An unexpected comeback, champagne, rivalry, faith.
Prompt Given by: Anonymous
Word Count: 807
Rating: PG-13
Betas: aldehyde
Author's Notes: There's fluff in this fic. *grins*
Summary: Albus takes a stand against his family. Harry and Draco bear witness. Unfortunately ( Read more... )

words: -1000, *fic, rating: pg-13, fest: 2008 winter shorts

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betelin_notecor December 12 2008, 05:36:44 UTC
Albus had absolute faith in their poor, traumatized fathers.

Oh! And that almost sums up the entire fic in one sentence. XDDDD

I can just imagine Harry and Draco standing there too. Harry's mouth will be hanging open in shock. Draco's mouth won't, because it is an uncouth facial expression that Malfoys DO NOT SHOW, but his eyes will be bulging a bit. XDDDDDD

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tomatoe18 December 22 2008, 03:07:10 UTC
Yes, to everything you said about Harry and Draco! That's how I imagined them, too! Dahahahahahaha!

I'm so happy you took note of the last line. If I may be so smug, I am quite proud of it myself. *grins* Thanks for reading and commenting. *hugs*

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la_dissonance December 12 2008, 06:13:04 UTC
omg, that last line is made of win! Assertive!Albus cracked me up, and also, I can't recall if I've ever seen so much hot snogging in one place before. Bravo!

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tomatoe18 December 22 2008, 03:07:53 UTC
Thank you! :D I definitely enjoyed writing the snogging part. XD

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sesheta_66 December 12 2008, 07:47:23 UTC
*snorts* - love that last line.

Traumatized, indeed. :D

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tomatoe18 December 22 2008, 03:08:27 UTC
Hee hee. :D Thanks for reading and commenting, hon! ♥

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lire_casander December 12 2008, 08:27:34 UTC
I can see Harry and Draco glued to the floor, staring at them in disbelief and wanting to do the same!

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tomatoe18 December 22 2008, 03:10:10 UTC
OH! XD You're right about "wanting to do the same". ;) Heh, heh. Thanks for reading and commenting as always! :D

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asnowyowl December 12 2008, 11:30:09 UTC
YAY!
I adored assertive Al, and submissive Scorp taking on a little assertiveness, too.

I love the image of the dad's standing there dumbstruck!

Great job!

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tomatoe18 December 22 2008, 03:15:51 UTC
The boys are definitely smarter than their dads. XD

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

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