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Author:cryptaviscus
Title: Now That's What I Call Initiative
Pairing(s): Albus/Scorpius
Summary: Albus Potter is a clumsy, confused student who likes to start-up clubs. Scorpius Malfoy likes joining them. Will Al figure it out for himself?
Rating: G
Warning(s): None
Word Count: 2,500+
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K.

Comments

[sleepingfingers]

The ending was really sweet, and I loved the acronym for The Alternative Sports Society. ;)

[aldehyde]

what a cute story! although i wish scorp hadn't slept with chaucey :P i thought the plot was original, and i loved the concept of all those clubs. just a small correction - you switch between tenses in this section:-

He still had to pre-order the new muggle CPR dummies for his First Aid Training Guild, organize the teams for The Alternative Sports Society and call Bettina to make sure she goes over their budget for the Culinary Festival. Letting his eyes and thoughts wander, he saw Scorpius Malfoy sitting a few rows over. They haven't talked since their brief meeting that morning where they discussed the Pros and Cons of asking the Head Librarian to hold a lecture for the book club.

just thought i'd point it out. good work!

[sivullinen]

I love it when characters are given small quirks, and Al's clubs work so well! What a lovely piece ♥

[jean_c_pepper]

That was just the sweetest story.

[lire_casander]

I completely loved this story. In fact, I think I'm going to rec this, i liked it that much!

Clueless!Albus is really sweet, and the acronyms were just perfect. Scorpius was pretty obvious, though Al couldn't be more... daft, to put it somehow. But he is my favourtie character!