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FIC: Consequences [NC-17] - Part 2

Nov 26, 2010 18:44

pairing: albus/omc, *fic, pairing: scorpius/omc, fest: 2010 prompt fest, words: 10k+, rating: nc-17

Comments 6

ura_hd November 26 2010, 20:03:12 UTC

Great story! You provided a very realistic description of 17-year olds dealing with unplanned pregnancy and child.

I am very happy that the story has a happy end. I loved reading not only about Scorpius and Albus, but also about all the other family members. You made everyone alive and interesting.

lilyginny27 November 27 2010, 01:49:54 UTC

I liked the different POV's in this. While I was absolutely horrible for Albus, I can't imagine reacting any better myself. I know my dad would be just as pissed as Harry and Draco were! LOL

Very beautiful how you got them all together again. Things like that take time. Well done. :)

ddz008 November 27 2010, 06:54:48 UTC

Great story. It feels very real and I love that it has a happy ending.

dirty_darella December 5 2010, 03:55:31 UTC

Very deep story. I'm glad it ended happily. :)

jezzifishie December 9 2010, 21:58:21 UTC

(I am so so so sorry for the late comment - I am useless)

I really enjoyed this - thank you so much! I didn't mind about the rating at all - I was so absorbed in the story that I completely forgot about it.

I spent most of the first part wanting to slap Al - hard. Oooh, he was being so frustrating! I really felt for Scorpius, he was so vulnerable, and for Al to turn on him... The bits at Hogwarts were so well done as well - I loved the world you built, with Al's family, and the ignorance and prejudice shown by both pupils and teachers.

I'm so pleased they got their happy ending :D