FIC: On the Beach [PG-13]

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Author: chantefable
Title: On the Beach
Pairing(s): Albus Potter/Scorpius Malfoy
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: none
Word Count: ~2900
Summary: A Curse-Breaker and an Unspeakable go to the beach...
Prompt: #15 (Submitted by silenceberry)
Notes: This is my first attempt at something approaching a domestic fic. And look, I even wrote dialogue. I must be under a spell. Many thanks

Comments

[tigersilver]

Oh, I *know* you, author! And am utterly smitten--by this and (natch) by it's faceted snarky-sweet brilliance. It's so SHINY!
I luuuurves it to bits!
GLOMP!

[zoranika]

This is why I read fics - every once in a while one comes along that completely brightens my day (not to say I don't like those that make me cry, bite my nails, scream at the computer screen etc., but you know ... I like to actually be happy from time to time :D ). Loved it!

[ladymirth]

Emotional constipation is my new favourite phrase!

So many, many, LOLworthy lines! These especially had me cackling:

...only to discover that the gnomes were just as bitchy on the other side of the garden fence.

...while I am stuck underground with dried Augurey brains to keep me company, you are out there somewhere being you and saving people from their demonic brooms and belly-slashing kitchenware...

Oh my God, listen to me, you have turned me into a complete and utter Hufflepuff. Someone should have warned me it's an STD.

Hufflepuff!Scorpius + Slytherin!Al = ♥♥♥

[lotus_lizzy]

YAY!! I love the banter :) I wished this fic went on forever :) I just want to see these continue with their relationship. You created a fun world I want to see more of!

[dirty_darella]

I loved their interactions with each other, so priceless!
This was fabulous! ♥