1x12: Ten Minutes (1/3)

[goldy_dollar]

Title: Ten Minutes (1/3)
Authors: goldy_dollar and _thirty2flavors
Pairing: Ten II/Rose
Summary: Hoping to prove to the Doctor that she can handle herself, Rose strikes out on her own and ends up trapped in a room with a bomb.
Rating: PG
A/N: Thanks to shinyopals for the beta.
Excerpt: Rose was in the same room as a high-tech alien bomb and five innocent people, and he was stuck in a

Comments

[erateini]

D: D: D:

[goldy_dollar]

:D :D :D

[kittysamuri93]

Ahh, but does he know the exact velocty of an unlaiden swallow?
He must know...He is the Doctor after all ;)

[goldy_dollar]

Keep it together Man.

But it's so fun when the Doctor crumbles!

Secondly: FANTASTIC tension build here. I hope the next chapter is up soon.

\o/ I'm so glad you like it!

Ahh, but does he know the exact velocty of an unlaiden swallow?

Of course he does.

[dashafeather]

Aw Cloen, poor bb. D:

Fantastic chapter, gripping throughout. Can't wait for the next part.

[goldy_dollar]

*pets him*

Thanks so much! The next part should be out soon.

[firstofoct]

“No, it’s not. Not right now.” She took a breath. “And Doctor, listen - if you can’t... if you can’t think of anything.... that’s not your fault. And we’ll get back in touch, yeah?” Her legs shook as she struggled to finish and it took all her strength to stay on her feet. “We’ll say a proper goodbye.”

Heartbreaking! Poor Doctor! Poor Rose! And here I thought I might have a break after the end of King & Country! ;)

I love the balance of suspense and the emotion, it's so gorgeous and absolutely gripping!

Very interesting choice starting out in media res! The way you continued the story while explaining the circumstances that brought Rose and the Doctor to this point was excellent. I can just feel the tension!

You have me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait for the next installment!

[goldy_dollar]

Heartbreaking! Poor Doctor! Poor Rose! And here I thought I might have a break after the end of King & Country! ;)

PFFT as if we would let things be that easy for them. XD

I love the balance of suspense and the emotion, it's so gorgeous and absolutely gripping!

Thanks! Action sequences are really hard to write so I'm so glad you like it.

You have me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait for the next installment!

Thank you! The next part should be up soon.

[wickedgillie]

This. Was. Amazing!

Not to mention I loved how Rose handled both Sarita and the tattoo man. It was SO very Rose Tyler.

Don't keep us waiting long!!!!

[goldy_dollar]

Thank you!

Yeah, I think this is probably Rose Tyler at her most brave and yet self-sacrificing.

The next part should be up soon!