[fic] No Such Thing as a Two Night Stand (McLaren/Rivet)

[the3sunrises]

Title: No Such Thing as a Two Night Stand
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Kyle McLaren/Craig Rivet (San Jose Sharks)
Word Count: 2801
Author's Notes: Written for ophidiae for zdarovyeh's "fic for Avon Walk for Breast Cancer donations" (for my personal fundraising effort) offer. Does that even make sense? At any rate, finally paying up on this one. I hope it fits the

Comments

[themagnetsmile]

Oh...wow. Part of me was like 'Just give in!' and the other was 'No don't!' It tore me apart!

I think 'loved' is an understatement. I really..can't even comprehend what to say. Gah, I hope you can understand what I'm saying lol

[leici]

Wow, thank you! And yeah, I definitely understand. What a lovely compliment! Thank you so much for reading!

[ophidiae]

*meeps*

Wow. That was intense. And, yes, it makes me want to see more, to see how they resolve this thing between them. I'd also love the backstory on how they wound up together in the first place.

[ophidiae]

Oh, and also THANK YOU.

[leici]

Well, I've mostly written the sequel to this, though it needs a bit of work before I can post it. As far as why they ended up together in the first place? That one I need to think about for a bit. I'm as interested in knowing the answer to that as you are, hee.

You are very welcome. I was a bit worried about how it came out, so I'm very glad you liked it. Very very. :) Thank you!

[mentalhygiene]

Oh I like. Oh I love. Yay. <3

[leici]

Hee, thank you! :D

Why yes, I'm catching up on comments, hee.

[mentalhygiene]

I love I love I love. The lust and the passion and manipulation and guilt and longing and. I love.

[nefarious1729]

I wouldn't have read this story normally (not a real fan of the pairing) but I saw the title and its awesomeness forced me to give it a whirl.

And wow. That's about as articulate as I can get after reading this. I love how the emotions were so confused and real and I just wanted Craig to punch Kyle for being a dick. But then I wanted Kyle to punch Craig for being a manipulating bitch. Wow, I loved this so much and all its complicated glory.

You are amazing and this story is everything that I wish I could write like. I am so glad that I took the time to read it.

[zdarovyeh]

If you liked this one, you should go read the earlier one. :)

[leici]

Hee! I'm glad you liked the title! It was really hard to find the right one for this story, and I'm happy to hear it had a draw. :)

I love your comment, and the reaction you had to reading this. I think I wanted to knock them both out even when I was writing this. I really love that it's coming across the way it is.

Thank you so much for giving this a chance, and for leaving a comment. And, of course, for the nice compliments. I really appreciate it!

[backcheck]

I THINK I JUST PASSED OUT.

I mean, yes, the sex is hot as fuck, but it's the way you've constructed these elaborate power dynamics just floors me. Both men have their pride to protect, whether it's their manhood or their family, and I love how these two encounters between them have thrown everything into imbalance. They push and shove and concede and resist, but it's almost as much against their own carefully structured lives as it's against each other (if that makes sense), which is really powerful and enjoyable to read and, augh. AUGH!

Plus, both of them are ridiculously hot, so imagining them grappling and tugging and fighting almost ... nnngh. <3

[leici]

Wow, what a great comment! Thank you so much for writing such deep feedback. It's good to see that I'm hitting what I'm aiming for, if that makes sense. I'm so glad it came across as well as it did, and that you enjoyed it so much. Thank you so much for reading, and for leaving such a nice comment! I really appreciate it! :D