PROMPTED COMMENTFIC PORN MEME THING

Jul 28, 2009 14:26

Ohnoez, she's having one of her hair-brained ideas again!

So, in brief, here is the story: I just found today (at work, no less!) a free-for-the-taking vintage edition of The Joy of Sex. There is no end to how amused I am by this. And, honest-to-goodness my first thought was, "How can I use this for ficcing purposes?"

Well, the answer is right here.

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Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 28 2009, 23:30:35 UTC
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His mouth was warmer; she'd noticed that even on the beach, but now she could catalogue all the things that were different and all the things that were painfully familiar about kissing him. There were many more of the latter. Perhaps at home, she would have balked, perhaps she would have pulled away and put some distance between them (too soon, it's way too soon), but confined to such a tiny space, there was nothing but him. Nothing but them. No doors or windows or carpets or mortgages or future. Just the Doctor and Rose and right now.

"I was afraid I'd forgotten the way you tasted," he mumbled against her lips.

Her fingers stroked the hair at the nape of his neck. "Did you?"

"No." His mouth opened against hers again. "You're exactly the way I remember."

He had his back against one wall, and without thinking too much about it, Rose found herself fumbling with the fastening of his trousers, wanting to touch him everywhere but settling for there, where she hoped he most wanted her touch. His resulting gasp when she grasped his erection was gratifying.

"This isn't the way I ..." He trailed off in a moan as she stroked him. "I would've wanted something a little more romantic, the first time we ..."

"Not the first time," Rose said, her words proven by how well she knew exactly how he liked to be touched.

"I know," he said, his hips moving with her fist, "but the first time in this body. First time of the rest of our lives together. Should be special."

She kissed him sweetly on the lips. "It's you, Doctor. So believe me, it's special." And then she slid down to her knees and took his cock into her mouth.

It was over quickly. He made different sounds, surprised sounds, like the way she was making him feel was something new. Perhaps it was. When he came, Rose thought his pained groan was one of the most lovely things she'd ever heard. She was out of practice, she realised with some chagrin, and struggled to swallow without gagging. So when she heard the Doctor say, "Ow," she thought she'd bitten him or something.

"Sorry, you all right? I'm sorry." She jumped to her feet and saw that he had a hand on the back of his head.

"Ow," he repeated, rubbing his scalp. "Hit my head when I ..."

Rose tucked his softening penis into his pants and refastened his trousers. "Let me see," she said, and he bent over obligingly. He really had smacked his head rather hard -- a knot was starting to form -- but the skin was unbroken. "You'll be fine," she pronounced, kissing the spot very gently.

"It would seem that sex can be a bit hazardous," he said, his face flushed. Then the Doctor pulled her close, his hands beginning to explore her body. "On the other hand, if that's the way humans routinely experience it, it's no wonder."

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 nonelvis July 29 2009, 00:30:42 UTC
That was really sweet! And maybe this is weird, but my favorite bit of it is that he hit his head when he came -- something about that felt so characteristically clumsy of him.

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 00:43:29 UTC
Thanks! Hitting his head under those circumstances was the first thing that popped into my head when I saw "hazardous."

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 tardismate July 29 2009, 00:42:37 UTC
Oh yes! Yes yes yes!

*iz on knees begging for more*

Icanhazmoarnaokplzthnx?

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 00:45:32 UTC
Thank you! I almost did write more (after all, Rose needs some satisfaction), but then I realized I'd written enough for a commentfic!

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 01:56:32 UTC
Thank you!

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 fid_gin July 29 2009, 01:12:16 UTC
Then he finally awoke and stood and stretched his arms above his head, revealing a strip of flesh above the waistband of his trousers. The shadow of a crease in the flesh next to his hipbone and the smattering of hair leading down from his navel were mesmerising.

God bless you.

I love this little fic, but...um. Well, when I finally get around to posting part 6 of TGH, you're going to see that the Hive Mind is at it again!

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 01:29:58 UTC
It was bound to happen. That image has been burned permanently into my brain, and I'm sure I'm not alone.

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 ladychi July 29 2009, 01:17:07 UTC
Ha! I loved this! Of course they would get abducted by aliens.

And who can blame Rose for going a bit crazy with the hip!flesh? I mean, hello!

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 01:58:18 UTC
I've certainly gone a bit crazy with it.

This was my first time writing Ten II/Rose where there was clearly a preexisting sexual relationship. I might have to explore it further. :)

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 morrighangw July 29 2009, 01:30:15 UTC
It would make sense that their "first" time would be in a rather unconventional location.... This is quite lovely. =D

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 01:59:26 UTC
Thank you! I sort of don't know why this idea never occurred to me before.

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 papilio_luna July 29 2009, 02:12:47 UTC
Awww, that was great! And hitting his head when he came, that's such a human, normal thing to do, but under such extraordinary circumstances. To me that kind of sums up the Ten2/Rose ship. :D Thanks!

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 unfolded73 July 29 2009, 02:16:47 UTC
It really does, doesn't it. *loves them more than is healthy*

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Re: Supreme Human Experience, Part 2 plaid_slytherin July 29 2009, 04:25:51 UTC
This was wonderful. I always love seeing Rose's thoughts about how Ten II differs from the regular Doctor and you handled it nicely here. And it might be mean, but I do love him hitting his head. :D

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