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Dec 20, 2011 11:36


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FILL: Something New (3/?) anonymous January 3 2012, 06:53:07 UTC
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It's two more hours before Esca hears the creak of footsteps on the stairs- much heavier than his own before. To play it safe he closes his eyes and slows his breathing. It takes a few tries before he can school his features into a mask of calm, but by the time he hears the doorknob rattle, he is ready. Any number of things could happen next- a handsy couple stumbling in and making the decision whether or not they are adventurous enough to continue on despite his presence, a handful of kids looking to get their fix away from the mainstreamers, someone come to have a nice, sobering puke or a private breakdown before heading back out.... He knows all the things that it could be, but there's something else that he longs for it to be. Someone else.

Whoever enters- they are quiet, quiet as they can be, tripping over the minefield of items that pepper the floor. He knows when they catch sight of him, a hearty snort ripping open the illusion of other-worldliness. Esca wants to smirk at the person in the room, their reaction endearing him to whatever cause they have for being here, but he just manages to keep the facade. The stranger drifts nearer and to give them a bit of reluctance as to continue their advance, Esca rolls onto his side and makes a show of snuffling before falling silent again.

The person isn't deterred and just as he is about to crack an eye and not-so-politely ask them to leave, he feels a large hand comb through the wild mane of his hair. The touch is soft, almost reverent, and with it there is no more guessing as to who is here with him. But for some reason, Esca sticks with the ruse. Marcus continues to pull lightly at the tresses, and Esca can just make out that he is speaking under his breath, though the words are lost.

After several long moments of this, his frame draws nearer and Esca can feel the hum of his proximity as his full lips stop just shy of his ear. "It's time to wake Esca. Not midnight for you just yet." The tone is light and teasing, and his name is whispered twice more before the effort is abandoned and Marcus begins to lip at his earlobe instead. The larger boy's palm comes sliding down from his hair, moves along his neck, across his throat- gripping for just a second, and pushes beneath his collar and down over his chest. Esca can't keep himself from moving up into the heated touch and his breathing is no longer so easy to control.

Intentions are made quite clear when the chaste kissing at his lobe changes to a wet and clever tongue tracing the shell of his ear, at blunt teeth nipping at the underside of it. Esca gasps and concedes to the fact that he can no longer keep this up as he opens his eyes and turns to find Marcus grinning down at him.

A/N: Just realizing now that OP might not have wanted an established relationship. Oooops. :P Nothing to do but soldier on I suppose! Shall we and away?

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Re: FILL: Something New (3/?) coeurdesoleil January 3 2012, 12:42:48 UTC
Oh this is so beautiful! I love how you can totally sense the intimacy as well as the tension between right from the start, and the writing is lovely.

I am loving this already!

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Re: FILL: Something New (3/?) anonymous January 4 2012, 05:02:20 UTC
Incredible start, a!a. Loving it so far!

Also, this anon adores established Marcus/Esca <3

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Re: FILL: Something New (3/?) anonymous January 4 2012, 06:56:00 UTC
OP here! I didn't have established relationship in mind, but it doesn't matter because this is wonderful! I love it already, and I can't wait to see where you take it. <3

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FILL: Something New (4/?) anonymous January 4 2012, 10:52:26 UTC
"Hello there." Marcus sighs happily as he noses his way under Esca's chin and lays a trail of kisses down to his collarbone. Esca just hums in return and links his hands behind the other boy's broad shoulders. "I was beginning to think they'd never leave." Never removing his lips from Esca's bed-warm skin, Marcus climbs in with him, straddling his narrow hips. They've been working up to this for months- starting with fumbling touches and awkward exploring- but tonight is different and the both of them can feel the change in the air. It's electrifying and frightening all at once, the heated air just this side of oppressive and keeping the atmosphere close and intimate. Neither of them could describe how they knew, but somehow the agreement was there all the same.

Marcus is persistent as he pushes Esca's shirt up his chest and begins to mouth at his navel. His breathing is labored, his enthusiasm evident in the noises he hasn't yet learned to hold back and Esca finds himself feeding into it, unable to keep back the fervor that makes his body tremble. For a while it is just this- the familiar motions and patterns of before, the two of them barreling closer and closer to the edge, eager to make the jump into a sated oblivion.

Some time ago- Esca can't quite remember when- their clothes had managed to hit the floor, and now an obscenely wet sucking has broken the quiet of the room. He groans and tries his best not to thrust his hips as Marcus' head bobs, a contented hum thrumming through his chest. For a brief moment the textured heat of his mouth is absent, though Esca can still make out the moist sounds on a smaller scale. He's about to look down in question when Marcus returns his attentions and the curiosity is immediately forgotten.

But within seconds the unasked question is answered by two spit-slicked fingers maneuvering behind his scrotum and dragging across the sensitive skin until they reach their intended destination. Esca squirms as they prod at his entrance, flush with excitement, but nervous all the same. Marcus' ministrations double in effort as a distraction and he slowly works in a finger at a time, making sure to allow plenty of time for his lover to adjust. The slow stretch and burn, while strangely pleasurable, is enough to keep Esca from tipping over the edge, causing his erection to flag periodically. But Marcus is patient and those his own manhood drips in anticipation, he knows that he only has this one chance to get it right.

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Note from Author!Anon anonymous January 4 2012, 11:23:26 UTC
Why thank you all so much for the support! I genuinely appreciate it and hope that I don't let you guys down. I would greatly appreciate if you blamed my tendency towards repetition and my rampant grammar issues on the fact that I am writing these between 11:00 and 4:00 in the morning. :P

Of course I couldn't write this at a decent time. ^^

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Re: FILL: Something New (4/?) coeurdesoleil January 4 2012, 12:48:24 UTC
This is gorgeous. It's got a lyric quality to it that I like and that fits the prompt well, I think.

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Re: FILL: Something New (4/?) ladytiferet January 4 2012, 12:52:05 UTC
I love it, the atmosphere, Esca's feelings, the pretending-to-be-asleep foreplay, Marcus being so considerate - awesome :D

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FILL: Something New (5/?) anonymous January 7 2012, 11:52:48 UTC
Once he is certain Esca is ready, Marcus withdraws his fingers and gives his aching jaw a rest, sitting up on his knees and drinking in the sight of the smaller boy beneath him, face and shoulders flushed red, legs spread with wanton desire, and pupils blown wide. He groans and has to pinch at the base of his erection to keep from losing it all right there. Nostrils flaring, it takes a few moments for him to settle and he reaches into the space between his headboard and the wall to find the jar of vaseline he's tried hard to keep private. When he uncaps the jar, the smell of it is strong and makes his cock jump, a conditioned response that is more than a little embarrassing.

He looks to Esca one more time- seeking the small nod of approval that is given only after a moment of hesitance- before slicking himself up with a generous amount of the lubricant. Belatedly he thinks they should be using some form of protection, but as he grips Esca's hips tight and pulls the other boy into his lap, he couldn't bear the thought of doing this any other way. He is careful as he pushes his swollen head beyond the tight ring of muscle first, and closes his eyes as the sensations overcomes him.

It is difficult not to thrust up into the tight heat immediately afterwards- his hips making aborted moves all on their own- but as Esca shudders in his arms, he finds the strength to keep his head and make sure he is not the only one enjoying this. Something this intimate is meant to be shared and he wants Esca to remember this night as fondly as Marcus knows he will. He pushes in, inch by inch, and tries to hold back the whimpers that bubble up from his throat. It is so much more intense than he ever imagined and his whole world has zeroed in to the two of them breathing each others' recycled air. Absentmindedly he laves at the hollow of Esca's throat and let's out a pleased hum when he finally bottoms out.

Being this close to someone- thinking that he is actually inside his greatest friend and first time lover- is enough to make Marcus shudder and he nearly feels like crying in joy when he feels Esca's hand smooth over his sweat drenched hair. The two stay like that for an indeterminable amount of time, comfortable in each others' arms like they can be no where else, and content to stay.

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FILL: Something New (6/?) anonymous January 7 2012, 12:23:50 UTC
But their hormones can't stay pent up and quiet for long, and soon enough Marcus is pushing Esca back onto a mound of pillows- hissing at the pressure put on his sheathed erection. Somehow Marcus is unsurprised when Esca makes the first move- smirk firm in place as he rolls his hips experimentally. Marcus is unprepared for it and slams his fists into the sheets, moaning so loudly he's sure the neighbors must have heard. Esca looks properly cheeky about it when he can finally raise his head, and in return Marcus latches in to a spot just beneath the boy's jaw, sucking, biting, and licking at it, determined to leave a proper claim as he works the body beneath him open.

Quite suddenly Esca is not so wry and confident now- brows drawn and mouth open in a wordless plea. His lithe body dances beneath Marcus as the two start to work out a rhythm, hands scrabbling at a broad back and heels locked at its base. Marcus thinks he'll be able to hold some semblance of control throughout the experience until Esca's walls begin to contract around him and soon enough they are both reduced to mumbled phrases and hasty gestures of comfort. The telltale lewd squelch accompanied by their choice in lubricant bounces across the room and spurs the two of them on, the sound of it familiar and erotic to boys of their age.

The encounter swings wildly between romantic bliss and awkward teenage discovery- the two of them blazing an entirely new trail and making the best of it. It is heated, passionate, clumsy, rushed, everything a great first time should be, and the first time Marcus strikes that bundle of nerves planted deep within Esca, the smaller boy clenches around him tight and pulls an orgasm from Marcus just minutes too soon. While Marcus groans, gripping too tight with his knees, and spends himself deep inside, Esca is left to ponder the strange satisfaction and gratification that comes with the sense of being filled with his lover.

He comforts Marcus through his aftershocks- shushing the apologies that fly fast and full of intent as he tries to regain control of his body. He kisses at Marcus' temples and eyes, rubs circles on his back, and croons in his ear. He would deny his gentleness to anyone who pried, but cannot keep it from the other boy in the calm of their privacy. Once Marcus finally has the mind to pull out, he grins sheepishly at Esca and rubs at the back of his neck. Esca smiles back, but he is more than ready to be sated, and calmly guides one of Marcus' over-sized hands to his cock, and the other to his weeping opening. It takes only moments with the heat of Marcus' gaze heavy on his body and before he knows it, he is spilling his seed all over their skin.

A/N: So, I think this really only has one part left to it, and it's prolly gonna be sappy, and I hope that's okay with y'all. ^^ I really had fun writing this and was happy to get another fill under my belt. Now I really only have one thing left on my mind. To de-anon or not to de-anon? That is the question. :P

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Re: FILL: Something New (6/?) coeurdesoleil January 7 2012, 22:17:14 UTC
I love how gentle and considerate they were with each other, and that Marcus came just a little bit too soon and that they were fumbling a little - it made this sweet and adorable but it also made it feel real.
Can't wait to read the final part. I love sap! :DD

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Re: FILL: Something New (6/?) ladytiferet January 7 2012, 23:42:22 UTC
It's so good, and sap will fit the story perfectly :)
De-anoning is always good, authors of good stories deserve credit :)

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FILL: Something New (7/7) davynn January 10 2012, 17:46:56 UTC
The two of them lie still as the try and regain their breath, skin flush and burning, muscles limp and tired. Marcus is the first to move- cleaning their stomachs with an abandoned shirt. As he looms over the other boy that overly pleased grin is back and Esca can't help but find it infectious. The tension and built up heat has suddenly fled the room and they begin to laugh contentedly. They share chaste kisses, whispering against each other's lips. For a while they share in this newfound balance in their relationship, legs tangled, hands trailing along the lines of their bodies.

Soon Marcus eyelids grow heavy and his speech slows. Esca pulls the worse off sheets from the bed and wraps the remaining bedding around the both of them, burrowing in tight to Marcus' chest. Sunlight has just begun to filter through curtains and he used Marcus as a shield- groaning at the minor inconvenience- all the while appreciating the glow that it gives the larger boy's golden skin. A sleepy chuckle rumbles through the thick chest beneath him and Esca places a final kiss in the center of it.

Finally, as they drift off into sleep, the two of them can just be.

A/N: What? My ending was tiny and mostly unnecessary? Haha, oops. :P Oh wells. Anyways, I just wanted to use my extra space to tell everyone I REALLY appreciated their kind comments and those are the things that really get me going some days. ^^ Also, I hope you guys don't mind me haunting the kink meme, but I just love floating around here looking for whatever strikes my fancy. :P

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Re: FILL: Something New (7/7) coeurdesoleil January 11 2012, 19:22:33 UTC
I don't think this ending was unnecessary at all - it was lovely and sweet and the perfect conclusion to this story <3

Love it!

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Re: FILL: Something New (7/7) lulahbelle January 12 2012, 00:40:02 UTC
Aww man that was lovely and sexcellent and aaaaw. Just mainly Aaaaaw. Thankee for writing it.

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Re: FILL: Something New (7/7) sistermine January 30 2012, 00:38:10 UTC
That was seriously sweet and lovely. You should definitely hunt around and play more here.

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