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Apr 23, 2011 18:06

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Fill: Passion and Profession, 5c/? anonymous June 3 2011, 17:56:55 UTC
“St. John. If you please.” He had no desire to speak a word more than necessary for the bare minimum of courtesy.

The Corporal laughed. “St. John-Tragedy!-although I suppose in a man of the cloth it is more fitting than Judas or Lucifer or Nero. Ah, St. John. Siiihn-Jiiihn.” He drew out St. John's name and laughed again, presumably under the impression that he was witty.

“Pray enlighten me as to your name, Corporal?”

Cpl. Fitzpatrick looked coolly at him for a brief moment, then sighed dramatically. “I am also cursed with a religious name, Siiihn-Jiiihn. My maternal grandmother, the Contessa di Monferrato, was very stubborn and insisted on naming me after my papist saint's day. Really, what can you expect from an Italian? She christened me Placido to my eternal disgrace, because I assure you I am no Catholic, and any man caught calling me such shall taste my fists for dinner. Alas, che sera sera. But at the least I can say Placido is better than 'Marcus'; the thought of passing through this mortal world with a Hessian's name? Absurd.”

St. John's narrowed eyes met his friend's across the table. A troubled look crossed Cpt. Aquilaine's face, so swiftly that St. John nearly thought he had dreamed it. When he looked again the Captain and the Corporal were back to gossiping about old friends from school.

That night, as he on top of his bed lay clad only in a shirt and trousers, sullenly watching blue curls of smoke float towards the ceiling and listening to the night-noises of the birds, St. John was startled out of reverie by a quiet knocking at the door. He opened the door to find a similarly-clad Cpt. Aquilaine standing in the hallway, evidently in such great mental distress that he had neglected to bring his cane.

“Reverend, please, may I come in? I do so want to see you.” St. John bade him enter and Cpt. Aquilaine, after closing the door carefully behind him, stood nervously in the center of the room. He clasped his hands before him like a penitent while St. John glared at him hard from the edge of the bed. The silence grew long; St. John spoke first.

“Your friend is an ass.” Encouraged by Cpt. Aquilaine's shame-faced nod, he continued, “an ass, a buffoon, and an idiot, with more money than taste and more breeding than sense; beyond all those qualities, he is offensive towards you in the extreme. You cannot possibly say anything that would recommend him to me.”

“Nor do I intend to, Reverend-I merely wanted to say how wretchedly sorry I am for subjecting you to his-eccentricities. He is-he was good to me at school, in his way; yes, he teased and pulled fun, but he also bought dinners and hosted countryside parties. That is just how I have always gotten by with him, and now I have no other means of going hunting or exploring. I had hoped you would enjoy the jungles and maybe see a tiger. I did not invite you here to make you miserable. I swear it!” He looked so distraught that St. John relented a little. He patted the bed and Cpt. Aquilaine sat next to him, hesitating.

“You are a decent fellow, Captain, but I do not generally understand the company you keep. This man laughs at you!”

Cpt. Aquilaine spoke in a quiet voice; the jovial exterior had once more given way to more private feelings. “In the past, when people laughed at my family's honor I could prove them wrong by strength or courage or faithfulness in battle. I have not yet found a good response, now.”

To this sad admission St. John had no answer, unless it was to place a hand on Cpt. Aquilaine's knee. “Captain-I am sorry to see you living your whole life under the shadow of your father's sin.”

“I feel I can never be forgiven for it, no matter how I try.”

“But Captain! That is the joyful news: God forgives. We cannot earn salvation, but have only to ask. And you do not even have to ask-you have nothing to need forgiveness for.”

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Fill: Passion and Profession, 5d/? anonymous June 3 2011, 18:00:29 UTC
Cpt. Aquilaine paused a long moment, worrying at his fingernails. “And if I did do something that needed forgiving? Would you grant me that?”

St. John looked at him carefully, considering for the first time that his friend's unhappiness was not due solely to Cpl. Fitzpatrick's behavior. “Yes, always! For you, Sir, always.”

The Captain placed his large brown hand over St. John's pale one. They sat in silence, staring into the middle distance. Cpt. Aquilaine let his gaze drift up to the stuffed hyena mounted on the wall, its mouth eternally bared in an unconvincing snarl.

“What a terrible house this is,” he whispered. He suddenly started snickering and tried to smother the noise with his hands. “What an awful man, what an awful place. I hope we find some good in all this.” St. John joined him in mirth, from relief as much as amusement, and they both choked down laughter until they were near to breathless. He patted Cpt. Aquilaine on the back as the Captain stood to leave.

“Sleep, with an easier heart!”

“I shall try. Thank you for your-reassurance. Good night.”

The next day, to their mutual joy-entirely submerged beneath deliberately downcast faces, the only exception being a quick glance between themselves over the selection of marmalades-Cpl. Fitzpatrick announced with regret that he was forced to spend the day sorting out production issues at one of the dyeing facilities. He encouraged them to explore the grounds at their leisure, and promised he would be back in time for dinner.

They spent the morning wandering through the various gardens, which included a traditional English herb garden, a medieval-style labyrinth, a garden showing off fine specimens of native flowers, and a garden dedicated entirely to orchids. Their host even had a row of box-trees trimmed into the letters of his name: PLACIDO FITZPATRICK, the trees read. Cpt. Aquilaine declared it the gaudiest thing he had yet seen.

“More so than the stuffed elephant's head in the drawing room, the one with the gilded tusks?”

“Phew-I had hoped to strike that from my mind entirely. Thank you so much, Reverend.”

They discovered a battledore-and-shuttlecock court behind the labyrinth and played an hour of bocce ball-Cpt. Aquilaine, once he had shown St. John how the game ran its course, was perturbed to learn that the Rev. Rivers had very good aim indeed, although he looked rather undignified in only a shirt and vest (coat having been discarded in the heat), crouching with a furious intensity over the green to determine the best lay for the next pitch, pipe jutting out the side of his mouth and one hand tugging absentmindedly at the whiskers on his cheek.

After the game reached its inevitable conclusion, they returned to the manor for a luncheon picnic basket and hiked to a small lake a half-mile past the gardens. While Cpt. Aquilaine poked around at the banks with his cane, St. John spread a blanket and lay out chopped egg salad, small meat pasties with curry, oranges, mangoes, and a large brown bottle of-he could not determine what.

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Fill: Passion and Profession, 5e/? anonymous June 3 2011, 18:04:29 UTC
“Captain, what have they given us to wash down our food? It does not look like wine.”

Cpt. Aquilaine twisted off the wires lashing the cork in place and sniffed. A slow, happy look spread across his tanned face. “Beer, Reverend! Probably made dans la maison, and now we have a reason to be genuinely grateful to our host. It is an Indian pale ale-do you know much of beer?”

“Not a thing. You must tell me more.” And so they ate while Cpt. Aquilaine told him more than he ever cared to know concerning the history of beer, monkish breweries, brewing styles, aromatics, and hop varieties. The bright afternoon light sparkled on the surface of the lake and the grass below them glowed as green as any well-tended lawn in England; the heat, however was entirely Indian and lay on them like a woolen blanket. But the beer was cool and crisp, excellent for reviving men who had gone limp in the hot sun. After the crumbs of the luncheon were packed away the Captain declared he would take a swim, explaining that the water made his leg feel almost whole again, that he nearly forgot the injury. St. John lounged on one elbow with his pipe, feeling the less-wholesome effects of the beer as well, while the Captain slipped off everything but his knee-length, cotton smalls and dove under.

St. John watched him from the bank as he splashed around in the clear water, bobbed back and forth across the lake, finally gave up on the breaststroke and floated on his back, eyes tightly shut. The Captain's ability to take pleasure in the commonplace was marvelous, and St. John could hardly fail to notice that in nearly every action-be it swimming, eating, traveling, exploring, or losing at bocce ball-he attempted to enjoy himself. He found himself envying Cpt. Aquilaine's enthusiastic embrace of his circumstances, despite his underlying sorrow, and wondered when last-if ever-he had himself been so carefree or unthinkingly happy. Never, perhaps.

He also could not help but notice, when Cpt. Aquilaine emerged from the lake to sun-dry, moving through various military calisthenics to stretch his back and legs, that the Captain's physique very much resembled one of the Greek sculptures he had described just nights earlier. Beads of water ran off his robust arms and broad shoulders, down a torso hewn as if from marble to vanish in his wet breeches. Dark hair stuck to his forehead over a straight Roman nose and square jaw line. Narrow hips, muscular thighs, and well-turned calves completed the statuesque Cpt. Marcus Aquilaine.

Cpt. Aquilaine turned to ask if they could stay a while longer, hoping to nap in the shade, but hesitated-for no longer than the single beat of a happy heart-before voicing his question. St. John realized, with a sudden flush of his cheeks, that the pause had been because St. John was staring at him, somewhat boldly. He glanced down to fiddle with his pipe while replying Yes, yes, of course they could stay as long as the Captain desired.

St. John whispered a humble prayer of thanks on the way back to the manor that he had been befriended by such a gracious gentleman; Cpt. Aquilaine gave no further indication, in word or in deed, that he knew he had captured the Reverend's eye.

That night he knelt on the rug to recite his usual Compline psalms and devotions and added a sincere, slightly desperate petition not found generally in the Book of Common Prayer.

Lord, I beseech Thee, forgive me for wayward thoughts. I know not what came over me. Thou alone knowest how I have striven against impurity and needs of the flesh. How I have struggled to bear my personal cross as Thou didst struggle to bear Thine. How I have always fought to keep my mind on Thee, and Thee alone, rejecting all others. We are all sinners, Lord, myself most of all-please, Lord, be merciful. Give me the strength and the will to claim victory over this failure as I have, through Thy Grace, claimed victory so many times in the past. Amen.

With that, he retired to bed.

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Fill: Passion and Profession, 5f/? anonymous June 3 2011, 18:10:24 UTC
He is walking through the labyrinth; the hedges loom overhead and have grown so close to the heavens that only flashes of sunlight can be seen, dappling his cloak with bright patches of yellow. The grass beneath his feet glows green like it did by the river. He carries a bocce ball, the red one with the white stripe, as red as the Captain's army coat, but it smells sweet like a ripening apple, or maybe it is like the apple Eve offered to Adam, crisp rind but rotten flesh. He holds it gently so it does not bruise. Every step he takes gives such gratification that his feet compel him to walk despite his mind's fearing what he will find in the end. His heart beats faster in his breast; he stands at a corner and burns to know what is on the other side. He rounds the corner. Marcus stands in the center of the labyrinth, fresh from the lake, naked but for his breeches and dripping wet, but St. John does not wonder at this because he is standing on a cliff, on the edge staring at the ocean below and wants to lean over and see better the crashing waves. He holds out the bocce ball, offers it to Marcus. This is yours. You mislaid it but I am returning it to you. I hope it is not rotten. Marcus takes the ball-no, the apple-and bites into it, juicy and sweet. He smiles so gently at St. John, reaches over and touches him on the cheek, says It is good; this apple that you have brought me is so good and St. John falls over the cliff to the water below as waves of joy, his footstep's long-awaited conclusion, rush through his body, heart pounding and blood like the sound of the ocean roaring in his ears. He is wet, wet like Marcus from the waves but glowing, fulfilled, because he has arrived at his destination and found his friend at the center. I am here, Marcus, I am here with you.

St. John woke slowly, happily, as loose-limbed and sleep-satisfied as he had felt in many a year. He stared up into the dark, trying to gather flickering visions from the dream that had quenched a long-simmering need as if with cool water. A labyrinth, an apple, ocean waves, a whispering voice.

He shifted his hips, almost imperceptibly, and froze as he finally grew aware of the sticky coolness in his lap. In one fell blow he recalled his dream in full, and the words of Tertullian drifted unbidden through his mind: in that last breaking wave of delight, do we not feel something of our very soul go out from us? St. John was no superstitious medievalist; he knew the powers of sin and temptation; he wholly rejected the tales of succubi. He could not lay the guilt at anyone's feet but his own.

What have I done? And Marcus Aquilaine, what have you done to me?

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Re: Fill: Passion and Profession, 5f/? misspamela June 3 2011, 18:19:38 UTC
Re: Fill: Passion and Profession, 5f/? coeurdesoleil June 3 2011, 18:44:03 UTC
AAAAAAAAHHHH I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FORWARD TO ANOTHER UPDATE ALL DAY AND THIS WAS AMAZING. OMGOMGOMG !!!!

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Re: Fill: Passion and Profession, 5f/? liztaya June 3 2011, 19:43:34 UTC
This just keeps getting better and better, anon! Love, love, LOVE this update!

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Re: Fill: Passion and Profession, 5f/? floatxxaway June 3 2011, 20:42:00 UTC
*happysigh* Absolutely gorgeous. I look forward to these updates, this story is so beautifully written.

The dream in this last part! Oh my heart! I love this.

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Re: Fill: Passion and Profession, 5f/? nachekana June 3 2011, 22:48:49 UTC
I just adore the fact that you managed to make hand-touching so incredibly charged and hot.

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Re: Fill: Passion and Profession, 5f/? poziomeczka June 9 2011, 11:41:28 UTC
!!!!!

OKAY SO I DIDN'T LEAVE A COMMENT THE FIRST TIME AROUND CAUSE I COULDN'T COMMAND MY FLAILING HANDS TO DO MY BIDDING AND TYPE.
BUT AAAAAH HOW COME THIS IS NOT AMONG THE CANON OF CLASSIC ENGLISH LITERATURE?

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Re: Continuation of Fill: Passion and Profession, 5f/? anonymous June 11 2011, 18:20:51 UTC
In case anyone else lost the thread here (like me), here is the next part:
http://the-eagle-kink.livejournal.com/2132.html?thread=2215508#t2215508

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Re: Continuation of Fill: Passion and Profession, 5f/? anonymous June 14 2011, 10:55:58 UTC
THANK YOU, ANON!

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Re: Continuation of Fill: Passion and Profession, 5f/? anonymous June 14 2011, 11:06:44 UTC
Thank you!

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Re: Continuation of Fill: Passion and Profession, 5f/? anonymous June 14 2011, 18:00:22 UTC
A/N: thank you, anon! Sorry about that--I know it makes delicious a little harder to follow, but it keeps the posts on the kinkmeme from being completely unreadable. Unfortunately that's just going to happen every couple of Fridays :(

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Re: Continuation of Fill: Passion and Profession, 5f/? anonymous June 16 2011, 06:22:48 UTC
"Unfortunately that's just going to happen every couple of Fridays :("
Small price to pay, and so, soooo worth it!

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