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Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) kdbleu December 18 2011, 01:06:39 UTC
Suddenly neither can move fast enough until finally they’re naked in darkness of the cave and Kara’s sinking around him. Lee gasps, reveling in the tight wet fit of her before Kara begins to rock her hips sharply against his. Her breasts bounce, and Lee reaches up to cup them, playing with her nipples, making her groan and arch for him. Lee watches as she begins to loose herself in the sensation them without actually closing her eyes, without ever looking away from him.

He drops a hand between her legs adding the swirl of his finger over her clit. Lee teeters on the edge as Kara bites down on her lower lip and moans his name. Lee. It echoes for a moment in the cave before Lee’s hard pants and groans cover it. He bucks up into her, watching her ride out her own orgasm as he comes rough inside her.

Then stillness. Kara stares at him unable to move, and for an awful moment, Lee goes rigid afraid that when she does she’ll run down the mountain to get away from him. Instead, she collapses, rolling into his side and resting her head on his shoulder with a small sigh. Lee runs a hand over her cool skin, to make sure this is real.

“I should go get our gear,” he presses a kiss into her hair.

“Mmm, stay a little longer,” she mumbles.

“Ok,” Lee pulls her closer. In the quiet of the cave, she’s his. There’s plenty of time to find out what happens outside later.

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) scifishipper December 18 2011, 02:27:27 UTC
Oh, K. I so needed this right now. I love it so much. <3<3<3 *hugs them tight*

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) kdbleu December 18 2011, 02:33:57 UTC
Oh, thank you. <3

I had a feeling you would really appreciate this tonight. ;)

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) scifishipper December 18 2011, 02:40:17 UTC
I do appreciate it. Thank you. And the writing is just beautiful! <3

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) kdbleu December 18 2011, 02:41:04 UTC
I was all inspired this morning.

Thank you so much. :)

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) wicked_sassy December 18 2011, 03:36:28 UTC
Mmmmm, great story, sneaky cave sex on Kobol! I wish this was canon. :D

One of my favorite things in fic is when Lee finds Kara's wounds or scars and loves on them with kisses. <3

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) kdbleu December 18 2011, 03:38:09 UTC
There should be sneaky sex everywhere!

I have a total scar kink. ;)

Glad you enjoyed.

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) wicked_sassy December 18 2011, 03:48:22 UTC
There should be sneaky sex everywhere!

TOTALLY AGREE!! :D

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) duchessduchie December 18 2011, 05:02:44 UTC
I wish this was cannon! Nice job with resolving why Kara made the promise to go back for Sam. I love how it was Kara that relieved her feelings first. :)

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) kdbleu December 18 2011, 15:51:43 UTC
Thank you. :)

Nice job with resolving why Kara made the promise to go back for Sam.

Honestly, I kind of think Kara says she'll come back because it's the right thing to say regardless of any other feeling she may or may not have at the time. Kara would feel guilt over leaving someone, anyone behind.

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) anamarya December 18 2011, 09:11:18 UTC
Oh, Kobol!

Great little scene. We have scars and a cave and sexy-times. And the end is just great because what they don't usually have in canon is exactly that - time.

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) kdbleu December 18 2011, 15:58:09 UTC
Thanks. :D

Nothing better than scars, caves, sexing and time. *sigh*

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) kdbleu December 18 2011, 15:59:17 UTC
No, Lee has no will power here. hee.

Glad you liked it.

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) embolalia December 18 2011, 15:54:31 UTC
If only! I love that Lee sees her magic, and that she trusts him enough for all of this :)

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Re: Scars, fresh and bright, NC-17 (2/2) kdbleu December 18 2011, 15:59:47 UTC
Magic can (should) change everything. :D

Thanks you.

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