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thatcowfreak

English Chapter 5, Poetry and metaphor writing

Jan 27, 2005 20:01

The number 5

Seemed not at all bad

It was happy

It was glad

5 hearts

5 songs

5 minds to work things out

but 5 was an unhappy soul

rotten and torn by greed

getting a long was not a choice

to be seen

5 found it so hard to fly

as llamas rarely do

3 was better and soaring high

quite like a cockatoo

3 was joyous

filled with song

now 5 is left ( Read more... )

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surfnchik415 January 27 2005, 17:28:54 UTC

Whoa, that was the most interesting thing I've ever read. Ok maybe not, but it made me laugh a lot.

f_r_a_t January 27 2005, 18:58:46 UTC

I have to say the same, it made me laugh. Little tip for youRayna, ask God to give you the words that He wants you to write for school, this may end up being more than just a school thing. you probably already thought of that but I just thought I would say it anyways. SMILE :) God Bless

thatcowfreak January 28 2005, 08:21:07 UTC

yeah it's actually very funny, cuz i showed it to my mom like as a joke and she was like "oh that's good" and i was like "are you serious???" my mom really did like it, but i think my papa is gonna make me write another one.
thanks guys for the "tip" :-D My papa was saying the same thing, how i can work on writing poems and it can help with writing songs and stuff. it doesn't have to be something stupid

thatcowfreak January 28 2005, 08:21:51 UTC

;)

audioajunkie99 January 27 2005, 20:32:32 UTC

omgosh hahahahaha that was very interesting. it made me laugh alot to. and word to barrett said ;) good luck on the poem! hehe

thatcowfreak January 28 2005, 08:21:42 UTC

haha glad i made you guys laugh, if only you knew the true real meaning of it. wahahaha

jeremyfischer January 28 2005, 11:30:41 UTC

that poem is awesome!!! four and a half stars!!

thatcowfreak January 28 2005, 15:04:35 UTC

gee thanks it was so dedicated to my flying llama friends. wahahahaha

savedbygrace381 January 28 2005, 13:36:59 UTC

omg rayna that was freakin awesome...

but good luck with your real poem and writing in the future.

"writing is my art" :P

thatcowfreak January 28 2005, 15:05:02 UTC

haha it's so funny that everyone found it so "funny" cuz i found it really stupid. but thanks ;-)

someoneweird January 28 2005, 18:48:56 UTC

whooooooohooooooooo for rayna!!!!!!!!! gosh i still think that is like the coolest flying llama poem ever!!!!!! it is like OMG i've said it once and i'll say it again that is awesome!!!! i dunno how many of these people got the real meaning of it though....hahahahha........

thatcowfreak January 28 2005, 19:59:58 UTC

thanks....again

but yeah i don't think anyone else really gets it but oh well

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well hislilly January 29 2005, 08:17:16 UTC

I think its very good. I like it. and i dont think its weird or hard to get. isn't it obviously about your band who had 5 ppl but now 3? I think its awesome. good job. and I dont think you should have to write another one for school bc well, look at Dr. Seuss. he was a master of writing and yet it was all so simplistic yet complex. I like it!

Re: well someoneweird January 29 2005, 17:08:27 UTC

whoa!!! whoohoo for colleen!!!! you got it i guess it wasn't that hard.....

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Re: well someoneweird January 30 2005, 16:48:31 UTC

whoa what was that about?!?!?!?!?!?!?!.........are you talking to me????

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