Is this pic finished?

Jul 27, 2012 07:01

I have this pic in progress on the oekaki board and once I upload it (and clear the space for another multi-session pic on the board) I won't be able to edit it there, so I want to make sure it's like I want before I quit on it.





Does the composition work or does it need something in the lower left? I've been staring at this picture for way too long to be able to tell. I've been leaning toward adding a little bit of a mostly offscreen forklift (which sounds like a lot of work), but maybe having something run off the edge would be more of a problem. Maybe the end of the box? (also a lot of work, don't know if I'd get the perspective right.)

Critique and suggestions about the rest of it are also welcome, particularly thoughts on whether I need some closer, almost in focus trees (or something else) in front of the blurry, distant ones.

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